something short

[SAballa99]

still new to still so bare with me

Bitches call me crazy,
but they can't hate me,
all they do is date me,
and i keep them knee deep,
but you know she cheap,
i feel skin-deep,
i leave you in a dustheap,
you looking like a dusty jeep,
how am i suppose to sleep,
when i got these girls in my up-keep,
all i want to do is make a big leap,
and put my dick in her beep*,
you know its gonna make her weep,
i am the beast,
just like the vp

[Just Silver]

pretty solid flow for beginner but... bars are microscopic make longer lines and bars and always try to set up a multi syllable rhyme
spottin

[gutawafang]

simple rhymes. but yeah, quite good for a start. vocab can be improved for sho.