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Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 30th, '09, 00:32

[Intro] (Wic Kid)
Craze - craze - crazy, you dont wanna play me
You dont wanna make me get my toys out on the playfield
Be careful what you sayin so just spit out the right word
And this is not all we got, this is just tip of the iceberg

[Verse 1] (BILI)
Ok bitches,here we go,me and my homie Wic Kid
We spit wicked rap,see we were always sick kids
While you fags lick dicks,we`re raping bitches
They scream while I fuck them wit my ten inches
We`re those guys that you see on tv that rob casinos
Steal the money,and escape in our lamborghinos
See bitches,we pledge allegiance to this weed
Ecstasy and speed,all we want is money,call it greed
We`ll fuck you up if you fuck wit us,call it guaranteed
If we`re on the street,all you can see are evil deeds
We`re of the hook,crazy,retarded,fuckin psychopath
We`re takin hell over,while devils chained in my bath
Walkin through the hell,zombies faint when they see me
Dark angels,you dont want 2 fuck wit me believe me
New World War is approaching,and we`re the reason
People are scared,but for us its just a hunting season

[Chorus] (Wic Kid)
Craze - craze - crazy, you dont wanna play me
You dont wanna make me get my toys out on the playfield
Be careful what you sayin so just spit out the right word
And this is not all we got, this is just tip of of the iceberg

Now tell me do you really know (how crazy I am)
You better do or I'll have to show (how crazy I am)
It'll be no escape from witnessin (how crazy I am)
Its Bili Boy and Wicked Kid in (how crazy I am)

[Verse 2] (Wic Kid)
They say Im a calm dude and completely non-rude
But who you gonna run to when I set this fondue
On fire and "na-palm you", now what tha fuck you gon' do
Now that all the screws are unscrewed in this looney head of mine
A potential pedophile, Im kiddin kids, now get in line
Im kiddin a-gain, aint I? Bili man, please help me find
Cure for this, Im terrified of Brit and Kevin Federline
What tha fuck?! Just let it slide, Im as crazy as can be
Actually the question is what tha fuck comes after this
'nother act of slashin wrists? But then Id have to patch the bitch
Up, and I cant manage it, so thats off, now imagine this
Out on the street rampagin in a McDonalds clown suit
Drivin a tenk and Im bout to bring the chaos on this town due
Its violation of my ground rule, "Nobody is ever allowed to
Disturb me while watchin Dr.House", you are all goin down, fools!
Dammit, I cant hear how loud you fuckaz are, this shits soundproof

[Chorus] (Wic Kid)
Craze - craze - crazy, you dont wanna play me
You dont wanna make me get my toys out on the playfield
Be careful what you sayin so just spit out the right word
And this is not all we got, this is just tip of of the iceberg

Now tell me do you really know (how crazy I am)
You better do or I'll have to show (how crazy I am)
It'll be no escape from witnessin (how crazy I am)
Its Bili Boy and Wicked Kid in (how crazy I am)

[Verse 2] (BILI)
See punk,I`m not drunk and you`ll still end up in a trunk
No one is safe from me when I go on my killing hunt
Everyone`s scared of BILI and Wic Kid,but you better not run
Hes poppin you wit his uzi,while I`m poppin wit my shotgun
Well to be honest we`re actually tryin to make a 2-man band
And rap like this:"Mi smo ludaci"which part you didn`t understand?
And even tho we`re killers,we gon sell more then Jacksons Thriller
We`ll do a concert and then start playin game "whos better killer"
Kill everyone and walk away in some crazy style like Riddick
I`m in a sword fight wit samurai,but I got no sword,so I use my big dick
And my dick`s the reason that all this fuckin girls follow me
I act like I dont like it,but its really good when they swallow me
You can see that police is searchin for me and Wic Kid in the news
But tomorrow we walk normally on Oprah`s show and do interviews
Ok,Ima have to end this,we need to get back 2 killin people
This is just like when Bad meets Evil,see you in hell for the sequel

[Chorus] (Wic Kid)
Craze - craze - crazy, you dont wanna play me
You dont wanna make me get my toys out on the playfield
Be careful what you sayin so just spit out the right word
And this is not all we got, this is just tip of of the iceberg

Now tell me do you really know (how crazy I am)
You better do or I'll have to show (how crazy I am)
It'll be no escape from witnessin (how crazy I am)
Its Bili Boy and Wicked Kid in (how crazy I am)



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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby gutawafang » Oct 30th, '09, 01:25

Definitely I'm feeling this song. I can imagine this over Psycho beat.

I love the chorus. Very catchy imo. Both of you went good with your verses.

DOPE. :worship:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 30th, '09, 01:28

gutawafang wrote:Definitely I'm feeling this song. I can imagine this over Psycho beat.

I love the chorus. Very catchy imo. Both of you went good with your verses.

DOPE. :worship:


Thanks a lot, man. U know, I was just rappin my verse and I had the Psycho beat in my head. It flows great on it!
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby classthe_king » Oct 30th, '09, 02:05

Dang, bili i think this is the best ive ever seen you. I liked the multis at the begining of the first verse. Wic Kid, you also came alot harder then i thought you would. Surprised me actually, nice job.
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 30th, '09, 03:17

^Thanks. :b:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby BILI » Oct 30th, '09, 10:47

thx class and guta

@Wic Kid chorus is fuckin dope :worship: :worship:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby BILI » Oct 30th, '09, 20:04

bumpin this :flower:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby Xray » Oct 31st, '09, 02:24

The flow was definitely there, and you both stayed on concept. Last I checked your work Bili you weren't as good, so good improvement man. Wic Kid, first time I check your material, it was good, cool multi's. This would sound pretty nice on audio. One thing that can be worked on is punchlines, both of you didn't have much punches are hard hitting ones. That and the use of metaphors. Good collab. :b: :b:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby BILI » Oct 31st, '09, 17:30

Xray wrote:The flow was definitely there, and you both stayed on concept. Last I checked your work Bili you weren't as good, so good improvement man. Wic Kid, first time I check your material, it was good, cool multi's. This would sound pretty nice on audio. One thing that can be worked on is punchlines, both of you didn't have much punches are hard hitting ones. That and the use of metaphors. Good collab. :b: :b:

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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby Wic Kid » Oct 31st, '09, 17:39

Xray wrote:The flow was definitely there, and you both stayed on concept. Last I checked your work Bili you weren't as good, so good improvement man. Wic Kid, first time I check your material, it was good, cool multi's. This would sound pretty nice on audio. One thing that can be worked on is punchlines, both of you didn't have much punches are hard hitting ones. That and the use of metaphors. Good collab. :b: :b:


Thanx, man. I'll try to work on what you said.
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby mcZu » Nov 1st, '09, 00:54

As said, try to work on the punches/wordplay/metaphors. Besides that, it's good. So nice job you guys.
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby BILI » Nov 1st, '09, 20:12

mcZu wrote:As said, try to work on the punches/wordplay/metaphors. Besides that, it's good. So nice job you guys.

thx man :flower:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 1st, '09, 22:01

if done right I'd probably wanna hear this track :y:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby emzee-frenzy » Nov 2nd, '09, 17:32

Yo, i just wanna say that i love the fucking chorus :worship:
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Re: Bili ft. Wic Kid - How Crazy I Am

Postby BILI » Nov 2nd, '09, 17:40

Rain Matrix wrote:if done right I'd probably wanna hear this track :y:

yeah i`d love 2 record it
emzee-frenzy wrote:Yo, i just wanna say that i love the fucking chorus :worship:

yeah Wic Kid did dope job wit it :worship:
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