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Re: Everythings Alright..

Postby embm » Oct 31st, '09, 23:41

nice :y:
depresin :(
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Re: Everythings Alright..

Postby gutawafang » Nov 1st, '09, 13:27

Nice depressing song.

I did't like the chorus at all though. Sorry bout that. :whistle:

But the verse is definitely dope. You chose certain good words to describe being down. :y:
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Re: Everythings Alright..

Postby embm » Nov 2nd, '09, 01:13

krayzy wrote:any feedback?

and sorry actually didn't notice your comment embm, thanks for your oppinion, yah its depressing was feeling real down writing this =/


u welcom :flower:
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