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Postby emzee-frenzy » Nov 1st, '09, 07:00

Yo, i wanna write a play for the school theatre, but i'm not sure what idea should this play have...

I was thinking about a guy who can stop time, like idk with a little object like a pen, something with a button, so he stops time and looks around him, he walks a while and ses his wife//girlfriend cheating and sees all kinds of horrible stufff, so at the end idk yet how but he drops the pen or whateve and the button presses it self and the effect reverses, he has been erased from space and time, nobody ever knew him.

how does it sound?

if you have any good ideas or suggestion, feel free to post.

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Postby gutawafang » Nov 1st, '09, 13:34

Sounds good to me.

I got an idea. how about a guy who was lazy in sch and then got rich after reading a book about successful people? I'mjust suggesting. the time idea is pretty good.
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Postby emzee-frenzy » Nov 2nd, '09, 07:39

i hope youre right. and thank's for the tip, and yeah that's a good a ideea of yours.
but still i'm in a dillema...
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