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Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 1st, '09, 22:35

I'm about to take you through a little bit of my Daily Life
first off let me say my methodical mind never Fails me Twice

so I Prevail in Spite of a world that's as cold as Hail and Ice
please believe you'll be Pale sick White when I finish my Tale Tonight

this twenty five year old Male will Fight Sailing Like a Flail of Spikes
the names rain matrix aka the cure for everything that Ails a Mic

I'm from the milita family and we Devastate when we Set the Pace
don't violate my Precious Space or I'm gonna have to Wreck your Face

I hope that Sets it Straight cuz I'm a ticking time bomb waiting to Detonate
my arrival is the Death of Fake I Expect your Hate I'm guessing the Threat will Stay

that's why all I do is sit and wonder how your Flesh will Taste
your never gonna Get Away I'm guessing that's what the Feds will Say

when they come and Investigate my questionable Practices
Acting If I couldn't possibly be a Pascifist nope That's Dismissed

but when I get Back to This Rapping Shit I'll be more then Passionate
my enemies will either Tapout Quick or straight up get Hacked ta Bits
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Re: Overtired

Postby classthe_king » Nov 2nd, '09, 04:47

nice rhymes, nice flow, nice everything. Dope piece :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Overtired

Postby lilrossy » Nov 2nd, '09, 07:27

crazy multi's man, good shit. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Overtired

Postby gutawafang » Nov 2nd, '09, 08:56

sick multis. :o

As usual Rain Matrix. I like the structure. UNIQUE!!!
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Re: Overtired

Postby Solace » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:31

Dopeeee shit. I always enjoy your flow and rhyme scheme Rain. Keep it up. Glad you're back :y:
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Re: Overtired

Postby Xray » Nov 3rd, '09, 08:44

The audio champion is back. :o
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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