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fun with an energy drink

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 2nd, '09, 18:28

here I Am Again and as a Man I Sense my overbearing need for an Ambien
so I can wake up to a different world and start plotting my Damn Revenge

there will never be Another Me Luckily I'm still around to Drop This
my rhymes are gonna Flood the Streets but I'll never claim to be the Hottest

lets break down the Process count up all your gains and your Losses
don't let your Thoughts Miss Objects like a thin line that's Dotted

son you just Crossed It you front like your some kind of Boss Bitch
but you ain't on that Pac Shit and I highly doubt that you Pop Crys

smoke resin Hold Your Hit and now take a shot of some one Fifty One
this militia family Soldier Is no stranger to this but you look Pretty Drunk

either that or your getting Dizzy Son must be cuz I slipped you some Lithium
you just devoured all my mushrooms now your in for some rather Trippy Fun

I think your Dosed Out your asking a man in a wheelchair if he want's Throw Down
why'd you try snort the Whole Ounce your cold and blue and there is no Pulse Found

no amount of help from your Posse is gonna produce a heart beat in your Body
immeadiately I'm thinking Naughy cuz your widowed Mami no longer has a Papi
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Re: fun with an energy drink

Postby emzee-frenzy » Nov 2nd, '09, 18:58

i likeyour style man, kinda simillar to mine , i loved this line :

why'd you try snort the Whole Ounce your cold and blue and there is no Pulse Found

Nice drop bro', but i think you kinda borrowed subjects from em like Ambien, lithium, one fifty one, and the dude in the wheel-chair etc or maybe i'm wrong, anyway keep it comming!
"misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: fun with an energy drink

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 2nd, '09, 19:06

I was actually doing strikeouts smoking resin holding my hit and taking straight shots of 151 once that was the motivation for that

Ambien and Lithium just happened to rhyme at the time and I kinda made this piece about drugs

in any event I'm gonna make a new peice in search of some redemption
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