Don't You Know pt 2(post ur links!)

[Tash8]

so this time i decided to go more lyrical since u motherfuckers hated on me soo much!!! hahah

no i'm not bitter, i haven't been in a minute
all you've done is make me think that love is a gimmic
i'd be dumb to think it isn't all over between us
cause reality of it is, what you did is too obscene
to forgive, so i'm venting out your fibs
a bunch of small lies that meant we're over with
how can something so little --- mean us so much
now I can't fucking believe that I believed in your trust
i see it now--it wasn't even worth very much
but i'm trying to move on, after song I promise
it wont take a long for me to get over this conflict
if you can't believe that then your not being honest
with yourself, you need to seek some help,
everyday I wish, you'd feel a tenth of these feelings that I've felt
but i'm not like you, I won't be the reason your depressed
so i'm leave it as it is, and just wish you the best (IN HELL, haha)

[classthe_king]

This is pretty dope i think. I don't see how its more lyrical though. It doesn't have to be lyrical to be good though. Are you goona record this?

[Tash8]

This is pretty dope i think. I don't see how its more lyrical though. It doesn't have to be lyrical to be good though. Are you goona record this?

lyrical in the sense of rhyming, i dont have metas or wordplay really but i dont think verses like these need themm

btw if u dont see the rhyming in this i'm willing to highlight it

[classthe_king]

I think i see the rhyming

And i agree what you said, this kind of verse doesnt need meta or wordplay.

[Tash8]

thanks guys...