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Tired Of Bullshit

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Tired Of Bullshit

Postby Solace » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:16

Fuck it I'm lonely, and don't you dare think of trying to console me,
Just blow me before you see four C4's G right up in ya homies,
You're going to place called hell, free ticket, go to the airport B,
If only you had known me, but no see, I hope I see ya body flowing,
In my bath tub. I'll say something to make you literally crack up,
If you act thug whenever you're with your fucking backup,
In this state of mind where I hate your kind, this ain't a racist mind,
I just hate all, and don't think if you ask nicely I'll be making time,
For you, or for anyone else up living on the fuckin' Earth's surface,
I ain't a patient mind, you live to diss me? Fuckin' absurd purpose,
You're worthless..Got me thinkin' "Solace, maybe they'll make amends",
Make amends? And right until my patience ends? I ain't makin' friends,
Planning to lock my peers up in cages and beat them with a crowbar,
"Listen Solace, calm down man, take it easy" NO, fuck you Omar,
I don't give a fuck about no charge, they took me past my limit,
Yea, I'm finished, I'll rip into individuals literal, body pieces infinite.
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Re: Tired Of Bullshit

Postby classthe_king » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:22

Dang this was great :worship: This whole part was dope:

In this state of mind where I hate your kind, this ain't a racist mind,
I just hate all, and don't think if you ask nicely I'll be making time,
For you, or for anyone else up living on the fuckin' Earth's surface,
I ain't a patient mind, you live to diss me? Fuckin' absurd purpose,
You're worthless..Got me thinkin' "Solace, maybe they'll make amends",
Make amends? And right until my patience ends? I ain't makin' friends,
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Tired Of Bullshit

Postby Emadyville » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:30

pretty good rhyming, flowed well, good drop :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Tired Of Bullshit

Postby Solace » Nov 2nd, '09, 23:33

Thanks guys, appreciate it :worship:

@Scotty Boy, I've never been on mic before so how would I know :o
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