Tell Me lies (PLEASE FEED)

[Yah-hah]

Tell me anything but the truth,
Cause I find no use in the lines I use,
Tell anything but what's real,
Because the ones that I kill are the only ones I feel,
So tell me lies

Tell me lies though I know you don't believe I could be so naive,
Cause fake smiles take awhile for my soul to concieve,
Tell me lies as if this dreamcatcher works,
And as I sleep in the dirt I won't dream of the worst,
That these beads and feathers somehow see the weather,
Like when I open my eyes I can see it better and we can be together,
I just want it to be easy cause never have I wrote such a greedy letter,
And when I put on these cleats (NEVER) my spine will only seem severed,
I can't live afraid if I played it everything below the neck would be permanetly sedated,
They say ignorance is bliss but bliss is overated,
So I guess you could say it I stay ignorant willingly,
But it really seems these silly dreams that are filling me are killing me,
"I have the most beautiful girl in my arms so I don't need to dream",
I wrote those words without much worth it seems,
And now my passion seems trapped between her flashy wings and my daddy's screams,
So past to me this gasoline so at last you'll see,
That you have to burn the packaging to truly see the black of me,
Craftfully you run your fingers across whip marks on the back of me,
Now you scream when you see the demons screaming after me,
Laughingly I cut 100 slits into my uncut wrists,
Somewhat convinced all I ever do is somewhat exist.

Tell me anything but the truth,
Cause I find no use in the lines I use,
Tell anything but what's real,
Because the ones that I kill are the only ones I feel,
So tell me lies

Staring at blank pages broken pencils and an empty bank account,
Staring at fake faces frozen mentally with all the shit I think about,
I've awakened now but I woke up to an ugly world,
With ugly girls no diamonds but a thousand pounds of lovely pearls,
Bu they're scattered and broken, fractured and open,
Unseen with one dream but even that's shattered and hopeless,
Splattered and spoken with every ounce of flow in me,
Every pound of go in me I not such a slow MC,
I just got to and see the illest verse ever spit just so they all know it's me,
Go between the roadblocks the whole block run until the show stops,
I'm dancing in the sun go to sleep when the snow stops,
Go to sleep? ha yeah my head wont let me,
I'm fed so get me another pencil cause the leads so heavy,
I'm dead so simply my zombie head wont fit me,
So often I ask if they'll decorate my coffin my casket,
But they just keep laughin and wlking right past it,
My sarcophagaus is lost in this thoughtfulness,
Camoflauge my words so they're lst in this forgotten bliss,

Tell me anything but the truth,
Cause I find no use in the lines I use,
Tell anything but what's real,
Because the ones that I kill are the only ones I feel,
So tell me lies

I mean really how much worse could it get,
When without football I feel like just a worthless kid,
All those days of lifting weights look how they worked for him,
The stars seem so far and God it hurts to miss,
My fingertips grow thicker your just a picture in my mind,
The only scripture I can find is a beginner in her time,
Just a flicker in her shine like the fissure in her spine,
No wait thats mine as I enter the center of time,
The inner winters frozen quicker broken splinter in the mud,
The sinners enter chokin with broken open liquor in my blood,
Armed with the ocean when I'm floatin on the sun,
Showin on the drum what is spoken on my tongue,
I speak the fire stop like sniper shots causing assassinations,
Words cease when JFK speaks blasting back a nation,
I'm weed wacking through streets packed with fabrications,
Exagurations like these abra cadabra magic stations,
I complete the sun's heat with only half the saturation,
I was born to kill a hundred men but I lack half the patience,

Tell me anything but the truth,
Cause I find no use in the lines I use,
Tell anything but what's real,
Because the ones that I kill are the only ones I feel,
So tell me lies

My past only seems erasable,
I deem myself incapable to escape the unescapable,
Every line I write I seem unable to finish,
This cradle's diminished I'm a man yet I quit it just as soon as I finish,
The sunlight seems too bright for my hollow eyes,
I won't finish today until tomorrow arrives,
I pump weights all day yet I never feel strong,
Start feelin like the Devil I've lived in hell for so long,
I can't hide even with my head up under the covers,
Want to rise out the ash but they keep pullin me under,
How long until I'm consumed I wonder,
But for now fear my words as the boom like thunder,
Wish it were so simple if only it were easy,
Been held under water till I'm no longer breathing,
Want to burn all my words but I'm out of lighter fluid,
My letters don't seem to matter amongst all of the confusion,
How could I be so stupid drench this page in gasoline,
This burnt match hurts so bad now that I'm trapped between,
Crumple everything I've written then toss it aside,
Bitten by these words until I'm eaten alive,
I keep peeking inside just needing to find a reason to hide,
God gave me no wings so I seem no reason to fly.

[Fa-Q]

Wow Jus good drop (have you dropped this before or is this another version of tell me lies) I like that line about the about beads and feathers sees the weather....that shit was dope goo goo(d) drop

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I have but no one ever feeds it.

[Rain Matrix]

this shit is pretty awesome

nice flow and really good vocabulary

[classthe_king]

Pretty dope. Lyrics are good, rhymes arent as good as normal but thats alright. I know you don't care but it would make your pieces alot better if you had better structure. People could rap them out better.

[Yah-hah]

Appreciate it Rain good lookin out homie.
Class.....man hahahah just messin. I know but it's just the way my flow sounds. I speed it up and slow it down when I say it so text doesnt sound the way I would normally say it. Kinda an old peice. But as always thanks for the criticism bro

[Just Silver]

Yeah its the shit right here
i liked this part:
Staring at blank pages broken pencils and an empty bank account,
Staring at fake faces frozen mentally with all the shit I think about,
I've awakened now but I woke up to an ugly world,
With ugly girls no diamonds but a thousand pounds of lovely pearls,
Bu they're scattered and broken, fractured and open,
Unseen with one dream but even that's shattered and hopeless,

Multis really worked for me sometimes no matter how hard you try it dont seem to work but this definitely did
OVERALL 89/100
My grading is tough too lulz

[Yah-hah]

Yeah its the shit right here
i liked this part:
Staring at blank pages broken pencils and an empty bank account,
Staring at fake faces frozen mentally with all the shit I think about,
I've awakened now but I woke up to an ugly world,
With ugly girls no diamonds but a thousand pounds of lovely pearls,
Bu they're scattered and broken, fractured and open,
Unseen with one dream but even that's shattered and hopeless,

Multis really worked for me sometimes no matter how hard you try it dont seem to work but this definitely did
OVERALL 89/100
My grading is tough too lulz

Hahahahaha thanks for the love homie

[embm]

again gr8 rhymes flow
topic...

[Yah-hah]

again gr8 rhymes flow
topic...

Appreciate it homie

[Terry_M]

This was really well done.

[Yah-hah]

This was really well done.

Good lookin out

[gutawafang]

this one is dope man.

totally loved the idea of reverse psychology. DOPE.

[Yah-hah]

this one is dope man.

totally loved the idea of reverse psychology. DOPE.

Yeah thanks guta good lookin out

[D'Leh]

dope multies, great structure and the flow was awesome!!!