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Today's Agenda (Knock Knock)

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Today's Agenda (Knock Knock)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 4th, '09, 07:53

Today's agenda... *coughing*

Laid back with pay checks from trading crack sipping fine wine/
All these mob bosses clip ya prime time to the hip with a "shy" nine/
Spitting crime rhymes; in heads I plant these sinning grime lines/
I aim high; gotta climb skies, knocking motherfuckers with a sly eye/
Another assassination attempt in this saddest of nation's contempt/
But fuck that; need another drug hustle to work; be patient and I'll relent/
These bullshit "thug's struggle"' on my nerves; just a coke deal/
In the midst of action, gotta smoke steel to make fuckers choke and squeal/
Not a "joke" steal; true robbery is when our crew shoots mobbers' knees/
Escape is like winning two lotteries; in anger, some foes threw pottery/

Everyday we dodging death by a millimeter...
Revenge before pussy; every kill gets sweeter...
Pay homage to the founders; Al Capone rest in peace...
In the meantime, we'll all get wasted over Hennessey...

Orders were to wait in the limo for the entire crew to bust the entrance/
Fuck attendance; even behind bars, we'll cut the sentence and "shun" repentance/
Knock knock; gunshot took the manager fast; no one bandaging her ass/
Our savagers blasted everyone in the lobby; save the janitor for last/
We got the Senator's "pass"; hopped on the elevator; see ya cops "metal" later/
Various methods to "settle" haters; guns pointed on the third floor/
Didn't want silence; preferred war while these words pour; heard snores/
Our target was behind the third door; knocked and faked room service/
I assume you're nervous; picked daffodils for his late tomb; he earned it/
No reply so be nice; we'll fight and cocked our shit before the door we burned it/

Everyday we dodging death by a millimeter...
Revenge before pussy; every kill gets sweeter...
Pay homage to the founders; Al Capone rest in peace...
In the meantime, we'll all get wasted over Hennessey...

Feedback please. :flower: I got bored of continuing the story past the second verse so I stopped.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Today's Agenda (Knock Knock)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 4th, '09, 22:02

Hahaha I know wat you mean bout gettin bored after 2nd verse. I dig the topic man it was nice. Chorus was kinda dope kinda not idk simple but it works not sure how to explain it. But yeah man overall nice drop homie keep at it
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Today's Agenda (Knock Knock)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 5th, '09, 00:44

Bump. :sweating:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Today's Agenda (Knock Knock)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 5th, '09, 04:01

Coleon wrote:yeah Biggies alright i guess ... :shifty:


Niqqas do bleed though. :o

Clever motherfucker. :'(
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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