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4th General Keystyle (Fabolous - Round & Round)

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4th General Keystyle (Fabolous - Round & Round)

Postby mcZu » Nov 4th, '09, 15:40

This new issue is due the misuse that I'll wet like tissues
So this groove is sinful whenever it seems simple
So I scene view the scenarios viewed at the cinema and pool
See me and the beat are cool
TV and DVD are set to play through
So I said I'm through when the beat is too
Too simple? I had to do that to
Gain acces to the brain and ink fuse your hippocampus with a shoe
Scratching the surface like a sleeping hippo can do
No can do, rather anticipate the broader view
And end the soldier move that's moving through
General tactician with adequate etiquette and tact too
Track the track down and put down the tracksuit too
Now it's sweating while embedding the rules
A simple duel when I utilize the dual scrutinized fuel
That's the definition of riding a beat fools
Drop y'all in a pit full with pitbulls now that's pitiful
4th General keystyle that's hitting you
I had to bring y'all back to a multisyllable school
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: 4th General Keystyle (Fabolous - Round & Round)

Postby Solace » Nov 8th, '09, 22:16

Pretty nice keystyle. Stay reppin' the Generals! I really enjoy your choice of words, because it seems you have like such a well rounded vocabulary. Not too complex, not too simple, just perfect. Nice ending to this too. :y:
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Re: 4th General Keystyle (Fabolous - Round & Round)

Postby embm » Nov 9th, '09, 01:00

very good rhymes/ story/ end
good job :) :y:
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Re: 4th General Keystyle (Fabolous - Round & Round)

Postby D'Leh » Nov 9th, '09, 21:05

nice shit homeboy!!!
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: 4th General Keystyle (Fabolous - Round & Round)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 10th, '09, 06:43

Agree with Sol. Reppin the generals :P nice peice homie
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