Lil' Story

[mcZu]

A keystyled story 'bout a golddigger.
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Let me tell you a story 'bout this babe who
I just met, spoke to babe a little after two
Started a convo, I told her: 'Babe I'm the truth
..you'll be home running with me like Babe Ruth'
But little did I know 'bout this babe's roots
I couldn't possible know –that in this babe's boot
Was a knife that that babe would use to
Cut through my capital like conquering Beirut
So I looked to babe rude and said: 'Babe you
..are crazy, babe please don't be a fool'
'I know you have money problems, babe, but do
..you even realize how many shoes you got too?'
Yes, this babe played me, period
At the same time when this babe had her period
Babe acted like a tampon, in the red 'cause of her debt too
I had to turn my back on babe and be cruel
If I hadn't babe would have eating through
My bank account like a pasta stew
After that babe had a Nervous Breakdown like Chip Fu
A lil' story 'bout what a relationship can do

[eminemgirl1234]

Ohhh, Not your best work...

[Emadyville]

def not bad storytelling for a keystyle, it was interesting

[Fa-Q]

Good drop...and don't change it because of me but that babe ruth line is great but wouldn't it sound better if it was shell be running home...cause then its not quite as obvious. Do what you want and good drop homie

[mcZu]

Thanks, appreciate it you guys.

[Yah-hah]

I actually really dug it cause it's not really wat we would have expected. Wordplay rhyme scheme is real nice. Good work Zu

[mcZu]

Thanks guys.