Dreams, Feeeed pleaasee

[D'Leh]

good rhymes, flow, and structure!!!! keep it up man!!! any feed on Dead wrong? my piece

[gutawafang]

Wow. You talk about your ex alot man. I think it's just another one of your verses in your depressed state. I'm not saying it's a bad thing. I wanna hear the audio to see if it flows cuz I couldn't rap out much man.

As for the choice of words, it's quite okay to me. I see some common words like "alcoholic". But it's significant to the story so it's not bad man.

7/10

[Yah-hah]

Yeah like wat guta said. You in a state of mind where you got alot on your mind so dont be afraid to let all that stuff out. Word usage wasn't the best but wasnt the worst either. Strong scheme and rhymes all that. Good strong emotion. Keep at it homie

[lilrossy]

man this is a shit hot drop, i luv it. Nice flow good multies and it had good emotion throught it. Luv ta see wat chorus u cum up with. keep it up man.