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Poem for ALL

Postby gutawafang » Nov 5th, '09, 03:26

If you know what ALL refers to. :happy:

Like how I bleed, it's what I need
Even if it is for just one bit
Make me sleep right on my seat
Fuck what I eat, you're all I need

Like how I cry, not answering why
Even if it is just for a while
Make me hurt to prove I live
Fuck whether I live, you're all I need

Like how I wear my favourite clothes
Even if it is for the slimmest hope
Make you think that I'm sincere
Fuck that my dear, you're all I need

Like how I write this lame poem
Even if it is similar like how you know'em
Make you trust me that I won't give my all
Fuck, I won't give all, cuz you're all I need
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Re: Poem for ALL

Postby gutawafang » Nov 5th, '09, 04:53

krayzy wrote:Simple but i really loved it, felt like i had a connection with it too, hard to explain, i dont really know what to say not much to critisize or anything, the feeling and emotion from the poem i got was all good, just the way you put everything you say was nice

just want you to know i really liked it, real nice job fish :happy: keep it up

Thank you bro. :flower:
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Re: Poem for ALL

Postby macdaddy019967 » Nov 5th, '09, 04:57

that was nice good job fish
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Re: Poem for ALL

Postby gutawafang » Nov 6th, '09, 01:46

macdaddy019967 wrote:that was nice good job fish

thanks for checking. :happy:
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Re: Poem for ALL

Postby gutawafang » Nov 6th, '09, 03:55

Menzo wrote:That was really nice Fish :)

cheers. :b:
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