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Postby BILI » Nov 5th, '09, 16:51

If you dont see that I`m dope,Ima have to diagnose that you`re blind
Petrify you and close your mind,and kill you like a ghost from behind
Pop these bullets inside you and scream "bitch now take that"
I`m outa my mind but I still make rap,anyone wanna make duet?
One time I killed a dude,just shoot him cause he acted rude
So he was screwed,but maybe I actually reacted crude
And this what I did aint cool,well I`m still just a kid in a school
But anyways I`m still retarded,and I`m getting rid of you fool
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Re: Not Changed

Postby MCyobi » Nov 5th, '09, 17:22

that was dope,great multies :worship:
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Re: Not Changed

Postby BILI » Nov 5th, '09, 20:04

MCyobi wrote:that was dope,great multies :worship:

thx ;)
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Re: Not Changed

Postby SajN » Nov 5th, '09, 20:20

Nice nice :y:
Its better than what you wrote in that battle, should had something like this :y:
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Re: Not Changed

Postby D'Leh » Nov 5th, '09, 21:58

great multies, dope drop man!!!
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Not Changed

Postby BILI » Nov 6th, '09, 15:10

thx a lot guys :y:
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Re: Not Changed

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Nov 6th, '09, 16:39

Nice! :worship:
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

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Re: Not Changed

Postby BILI » Nov 6th, '09, 19:21

eminemgirl1234 wrote:Nice! :worship:

thx girl :y: :flower:
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Re: Not Changed

Postby classthe_king » Nov 6th, '09, 20:46

Your getting alot better with your multis :worship:

One thing to work on though is that the multis rhyme exactly. Like

diagnose that you`re blind
close your mind
ghost from behind

The rhymes are good but they would work better if the words inside them rhymed :y:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Not Changed

Postby BILI » Nov 6th, '09, 21:10

classthe_king wrote:Your getting alot better with your multis :worship:

One thing to work on though is that the multis rhyme exactly. Like

diagnose that you`re blind
close your mind
ghost from behind

The rhymes are good but they would work better if the words inside them rhymed :y:

thx ;)
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Re: Not Changed

Postby gutawafang » Nov 7th, '09, 10:02

It flows very well. I liked that. Multis quite good. :y: Expected more but this was good enough. ;)
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