Goodbye....

[gutawafang]

This is pretty good in terms of expression. In terms of skill, it's not bad. It can be improved a lot man.

[Drama Setter]

DAmn good man , Very depressive too

fuck it you win, he gets the gun this'll make my life all better
i hope that you all enjoyed this, this was my final suicidle letter

[lilrossy]

man this shit is hot. ur really good at tellin a story, ive never been good at that. it was a good read man, keep it up.

[gutawafang]

thankyou Fish

could be improved alot in terms of skill, can you expand or tell me what you mean on that? just wondering, cause with multies and rhymes and flow and basically sorta the lyrcism i thought i put alot into it, you mean i could of just said what i said better or something? sorry if im confusing lol havent slept for 2 fuckin days!!lol

its like im on a male period lol but im real depressed and stressed, been having a pattern of not sleeping, and sleeping every 2 days it seems, anyway im getting chatty now i'll shutup

again thanks for the fast response lol

in terms of flow I guess. I can't rap it out. But that's partially my fault. LOL. You can use doper words I think. It's just that I seen better from you.