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Up In The Air [unfinished]

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Up In The Air [unfinished]

Postby lilrossy » Nov 6th, '09, 09:33

chorus: (Man Singing)x2
Ive been here to long, feelin like im goin nowhere,
now they tryna hold me down but they can't cuz im up in the air
(Up in the air, Yeah)

and so we calm and we sing, relaxed like an arm in a sling,
ready for for the world and all the dramas it brings,
was once gona snap like a string but bounced bak like a spring,
now im prepaired to stand as a man and be a king,
lock hands and we swing, kling and smile without a care,
nothin compaires to the times that we've shared,
no time to be scared, this our moment right here,
for years been waitin' for this moment with our peers,
so lets own it, bring out the beers, pop the top and cheers,
scoff the lot, walk the spot, sayin our sinceres,
fightin bak tears, shiit, ima miss ya's for real,
this is surreal, over the years we've been windin the reel,
from the beginin, thru ups and downs, now its a new film,
cuz the worlds gon keep spinnin like a bicycle wheel.

Chorus

jus sumthin i was workin on, jus wana see if its any good or not.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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Re: Up In The Air [unfinished]

Postby lilrossy » Nov 6th, '09, 11:32

thanx alot man, i was a bit worried that it wasnt that good lyrically but im glad you still liked it anyway. thanx for the feedbak man. :D
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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