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Postby emzee-frenzy » Nov 7th, '09, 11:58

yo yo, check it out

ropes and throns got my whole fuckin body broken boned
I got a couple of folks with horns ready to have you stroke and tworned
yo, i skip classes and when i don't i come to school to whip asses
Fucking my math teacher, that's how the test passes, dumb bastards
Control knives stolen from a bunch of bald guys an stuck 'em in trinnel 05's
Pussy while she's like "oh my", drive by an old guy and shoot 'em with my 45
I'm jus playing with voodo dolls, yes i do do drugs, so what, you biggie smalls?
got your head stuck to the wall like siameze twins with sticky skulls.

No offence trinnel, i love you!
"misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Postby emzee-frenzy » Nov 7th, '09, 14:25

i know it's simple and shit, i did it in like a few minutes, i was bored. lol.
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Postby lilrossy » Nov 8th, '09, 10:13

not to bad man, i enjoyed readin it.
emzee-frenzy wrote:yo, i skip classes and when i don't i come to school to whip asses

i liked that line.
overall it wasnt anything special, nothin really stood out. flowed alright and good use of multis.
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Postby Solace » Nov 8th, '09, 22:02

I liked this shit, good flow and multies.

ropes and throns got my whole fuckin body broken boned
I got a couple of folks with horns ready to have you stroke and tworned
yo, i skip classes and when i don't i come to school to whip asses
Fucking my math teacher, that's how the test passes, dumb bastards


Favourite part in it. Keep at it dude, you're pretty good :y:
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