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some of my cousins keystyles(need feed)

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some of my cousins keystyles(need feed)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 8th, '09, 04:06

1.check it, the best of the best/ stay strapped with tephlon vests/ protectin the chest/ with this foes can't bet on my death/ i keep a wes in my waist ready to be drawn out/ stash a back up in my ankle plus a razor inside of my mouth b4 i go out i gotta go cleanse my dentals/ but just to be safe i still wear a helmet to save my mentals/ i'm neva jello or gelatin garmets/ titanium steels equiped exo skelotons armors/this be the droppers drama/ hiroshima of nuclear bombers/livin life on the street corner sellin drugs to pirahnas/

2.battles i bring
with stylistic schemes
in full length
strong and ultimatley skillful to greens strength
mc's styles from gorge i still smoke more
clowned you and yours
i got more head from the state than mount rushmore
yo i leave heads dead and fold'em like bed spreads
kick open doors
i'd say consider the realest mc but that's only droppin dead metaphors
and i dont do that especially with them cracks on the wax
but watch my filanges cuz these fingers way too happy for triggas jack
breakin down forts as i stalk gees
wars i thwart with emcees
my wordplay strate unheard of like a hetrosexual dude sportin caprees
all that i see is gettin green
even if it means puttin a kid in a hearse
and if my mother got money stashed i'm snatchin from her purse
so let me know what you think
everybody in the world gotta eat but green 63 neva settles for chinks





3.analyze under the street lights blood penatrates deep/the dead getter was armed b4 his guts hit the street/it was 45 degrees but the heaters werent siezed/evils deceased/diseased thieves/spark up the heat/ the irony be cracked out peaceful crooked police/character searchin frantically still stalkin the streets/5 dollar look outs for officers walkin the beat/witnesses yellin claimin that they talked to the beast/now it's 200 pounds of cadavers the coroners facin/murder cases/and the physical basis is shell cases/labratory's tryna put crooks inside of there places/plastic bagged faces with they whole torsos laced up/


3 really old keystyles from a wu tang forum. hes gotten miles better just wonderin what u guys think
is the best one REALLY WANT FEED BECAUSE MY COUSIN DOESNT KNO I KNO HE RAPS AND KEEPS IT A SECRET... IT WOULD BE NICE TO KNOW WHAT PEOPLE THOUGHT
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