Keep The Scheme (Quick Keystyle)

[Solace]

Solace knowledge is flawless, being honest, I'm constantly on this,
Rocking bomb shit, no area for flawing, so I keep y'all astonished,
More fucked up than bondage, droppin' the hottest hip hop shit,
Crowds is applauding, I'm appalling, mauling, you can't stop this,
Try to mock this, my keystyle flows are steady, it ain't no object,
Throw anything I'll block it, top it so call it legend with this not writ-
ten lyrics, Skywalking over Luke top notch shit while I'm ballin',
Bigger than Wallace, I'm stalking and killing, the Rap game I've got it,
I've got it and locked it right up into my own box bitch,
Get the gun and cock, blast at anybody thinking that I'm not sick,
So you better watch it, poppin' these glocks bitch right at ya soft spit,
No, not sexual literal optics and I'm running out of rhymes to rock with,
These multi-syllable rhymes I will not stop with, eroding a jock bitch,
More melodic than Bach bitch, don't mock it, outta rhymes I'll stop it.

Pretty crappy but I just felt like keystyling and seeing how long it takes before I can't instantly think of another rhyme.

[Spyder]

good for a keystyle
all kinda just random lines that most didnt make the most of sense
but its a qicky with good multies so props

[Solace]

^Point out any lines that you think don't make sense and I can clarify.

Thanks for feed, glad you think it had good multies.

[Spyder]

Solace knowledge is flawless, being honest, I'm constantly on this,
Rocking bomb shit, no area for flawing, so I keep y'all astonished,
More fucked up than bondage, droppin' the hottest hip hop shit,
Crowds is applauding, I'm appalling, mauling, you can't stop this,
Try to mock this, my keystyle flows are steady, it ain't no object,
Throw anything I'll block it, top it so call it legend with this not writ-
ten lyrics, Skywalking over Luke top notch shit while I'm ballin',
Bigger than Wallace, I'm stalking and killing, the Rap game I've got it,
I've got it and locked it right up into my own box bitch,
Get the gun and cock, blast at anybody thinking that I'm not sick,
So you better watch it, poppin' these glocks bitch right at ya soft spit,
No, not sexual literal optics and I'm running out of rhymes to rock with,
These multi-syllable rhymes I will not stop with, eroding a jock bitch,
More melodic than Bach bitch, don't mock it, outta rhymes I'll stop it.

Bold equals rhyme i didnt get or seemed to have no relavance
and Italic equals rhymes use to much throughout the verse

but being real i liked man, just trying to help out a fellow general

[Solace]

Solace knowledge is flawless, being honest, I'm constantly on this,
Rocking bomb shit, no area for flawing, so I keep y'all astonished,
More fucked up than bondage, droppin' the hottest hip hop shit,
Crowds is applauding, I'm appalling, mauling, you can't stop this,
Try to mock this, my keystyle flows are steady, it ain't no object,
Throw anything I'll block it, top it so call it legend with this not writ-
ten lyrics, Skywalking over Luke top notch shit while I'm ballin',
Bigger than Wallace, I'm stalking and killing, the Rap game I've got it,
I've got it and locked it right up into my own box bitch,
Get the gun and cock, blast at anybody thinking that I'm not sick,
So you better watch it, poppin' these glocks bitch right at ya soft spit,
No, not sexual literal optics and I'm running out of rhymes to rock with,
These multi-syllable rhymes I will not stop with, eroding a jock bitch,
More melodic than Bach bitch, don't mock it, outta rhymes I'll stop it.

Bold equals rhyme i didnt get or seemed to have no relavance
and Italic equals rhymes use to much throughout the verse

but being real i liked man, just trying to help out a fellow general

I can understand about the rhymes I overused, hell man it was fully written at an instant like I just kept typing so I didnt care much if I had reused the rhymes. But you put "outta rhymes" in italic...It wasn't a rhyme though. I just said it twice.

Soft Spit - I thought this was self explanatory but you know when rappers rap its considering they're "spitting rhymes", just saying I'm shooting at their soft rhymes.

Sexual Literal Optics - Okay, optics made no fucking sense but by sexual literal --- i meant like dont take "soft spit" wrong and turn it into a sex joke.

Eroding a jock bitch - That was random as fuck yeah, I just meant like a jock in a school...Ill erode him. Fade him away.

[Spyder]

yea no man dont get your panties ina bunch ahahahaah

but no the soft spit, i thought u were trying to say soft spot... cause u said sumin like aim it at your soft spit... lol

but good peice lets leave it at that

[Solace]

yea no man dont get your panties ina bunch ahahahaah

I wasn't tryna be mean if thats what your implying.

but no the soft spit, i thought u were trying to say soft spot... cause u said sumin like aim it at your soft spit... lol

Yeah that would make sense i guess.

but good peice lets leave it at that

Wry thunk u.

[Spyder]

you u werent being mean

just making your drop look like it has many replies

[Solace]

Word I know huh

with all these replies it must be dope

[Spyder]

o fuck yeah

[mcZu]

I liked it, pretty dope for a keystyle.

[Solace]

Thanks dude

[Relapse.LP]

Good verse, but a little more diversity in rhyming wouldn't hurt.

You overused the words "it", "shit", and "this". And the rhyme scheme of "-op, -it" could be switched up, unless that was the main point of the entire piece.

[Solace]

No it wasn't the point, at the moment I just couldn't think of anything else so I had to reuse stuff.

Appreciate the feed.

[Relapse.LP]

No it wasn't the point, at the moment I just couldn't think of anything else so I had to reuse stuff.

Appreciate the feed.

No problem.

Still pretty sick for a key-style, if this was non-stop typing.

Good verse.