K-illmatic (Lyrical Genocide) [Part 1]

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From day one, will be exterminating entire generations while terminating empires and nations/
Fuck "sins" so I've been germinating "desire's" foundation to determine "hating" "admired" temptations/
Like Germans' waiting requires frustration at running Jews; "I'm"mortal like the typical human/
Gotta design portals to the "clinical" room-since my rhymes more "ill" than swine flu pandemics/
After a quick victory, I chortle more evilly than cynical "Cubans" when they lie to "drug" academics/
Trying more "Coke" than the "Pepsi" so I'm "higher" than flying poor "crows" that are sweating/
Enemies sighing more woe than "Betty Crocker" bankrupt; eyes open fighting more hordes of enemies/
"Writing" your discord whether "Ready" or not "to Die" with "Big E's"* like "Marshall" album covers/
"Asian" parents make your "homework-partial" outcome "hover" like "aero"-"SAT"; even seldom lovers/**
Of school will convert; kill these "cats" "9" times so they "anti-war" & hate "martial" troublesome causers/

*Big E's means "Biggie" (Ready to Die) and the "E" on the cover of Eminem albums.
** "Aero-" means air and relates to "hover" as "homework-partial" relates to the "SAT" test. Aerosat is a company that specializes in antenna technology.

Feedback please. Part 2 with chorus coming soon.

[Spyder]

pretty good man i was really pimped about the begging but i thought it faded twords the end
i think the swine flu line is overplayed now-a-days but thats my 2 cents

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pretty good man i was really pimped about the begging but i thought it faded twords the end
i think the swine flu line is overplayed now-a-days but thats my 2 cents

There was begging in my verse?

[classthe_king]

yeah, it started off strong with great rhymes in the begining, but lines are way to long, makes it really hard to rap.

^^^And seriously

[Relapse.LP]

yeah, it started off strong with great rhymes in the begining, but lines are way to long, makes it really hard to rap.

^^^And seriously

Sorry. I like longer lines and I was just experimenting with my multies.

There's probably tons of hidden ones in there some peeps can't catch.

You understand what Spyder is talking about? (or not...)

[classthe_king]

begging but i thought it faded twords the end

lets try to figure out what he meant to put

[Wic Kid]

Your way to create lotta multies that actually make sense is amazing. Really. Awesome job there. But you really need to make ya lines shorter, so you could flow it better. But then you couldnt have so many multies as you do now.

Aint rappin a bitch?...

[Spyder]

hahahahhahahah yes Class knows

i meant beggining

[Wic Kid]

hahahahhahahah yes Class knows

i meant beggining

You spelled it wrong AGAIN...

[Spyder]

my fingers dyslexia have

[Wic Kid]

my fingers dyslexia have

I know, similar shit happens to me sometimes.

This sentence no verb.

[Spyder]

my fingers dyslexia have

I know, similar shit happens to me sometimes.

This sentence no verb.

[Wic Kid]

^Never mind...

I dont like explainin my jokes.

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I'ma talk like Spyder from now on.

Smells like Up Dog in here...

Your way to create lotta multies that actually make sense is amazing. Really. Awesome job there. But you really need to make ya lines shorter, so you could flow it better. But then you couldnt have so many multies as you do now.

Aint rappin a bitch?...

Thanks a lot and I know I need to make them shorter. But I like longer ones.

And people are sleeping on some of the punchlines. Haha, just playing.

Keep the feedback coming...

[Fa-Q]

Fuck that was good....good hidden shit I like that