Dear Dad Pt. II

[Solace]

Walks in from fucking work, I'm excited but to him I am nothing worth,
I am but a stuck up twerp, how much it hurts from that fuckin' jerk,
Wasn't sure, of it at the time, but I figured he hit the bottle half to nine,
When I was five, so I would ask him why was he acting psyched,
Used to want to be just like him, til I heard the screams and all the fighting,
Beating, screaming at my mother, then he'd be calling his wife "Bitch"...
I wish to tear through this fat bitch addict with an automatic,
Fuck this madness, doesn't care that he fucking caused this sadness,
Wish he would've just stomped this habit, I'm sick in the stomache,
Keep smoking, I'll make sure at least one thing rips in your lung bitch,
I hate you, you're a liar, despicable, how I hate ever trusting you,
Fuck it's true, here I'll give you a stick, you know where to shove it to,
Never had no love in you, this passionate hate burns his memory,
As a child he was always vexing me, now he will forever be an enemy,
You couldn't ever do shit for me, disabled dad, a handicapped?
I'm a little fucked up in the brain, well I guess it runs in the family, dad.

[classthe_king]

Great imagery with your lyrics, I saw and felt all this happening the whole time i was reading it.

[Solace]

Thanks guys.

[classthe_king]

pretty good drop, could really feel you're emotion in it, i remember loving the first one though, still a good piece, something you and Em have in common

I never saw a first one

[Solace]

pretty good drop, could really feel you're emotion in it, i remember loving the first one though, still a good piece, something you and Em have in common

I never saw a first one

BC (Before Class)

it was to a soundclick beat, i remember

Death By Notes; Slantize

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[classthe_king]

i was goona right a song to that beat too

Both parts are dope

[Solace]

^^Thanks dude, and glad you liked the other part Class.

[Solace]

Thanks Chet.

[Wic Kid]

Wow, readin this shit really creates a picture in your head.

Solace, hat off.

[Solace]

Thanks

[noel]

Good read- was your dad really like that?

Sorry if he was... at least you can now use the raw emotion to your advantage.

[Solace]

^Why, yes, yes he was, and I'm glad you think it's a good read.

And yeah it's quite good for venting

[Yah-hah]

Yo man I really feel this one. Similar stuff goin on. Really dug it though man. return feed?
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[mcZu]

I remember reading part 1. Good drop Omar, felt the emotion, keep it up.