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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby gutawafang » Nov 11th, '09, 03:33

Full of dope multis. Really dope. I don't know what else to say man. :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 11th, '09, 03:46

Good verse although I don't like the Sorcerer part. Katana Blades series was dope. :smoking:

And Coleon, you're in the rap tourney right? Your verse is due soon... I already finished mine and you should PM Scott M it soon.

I'm against you, by the way. Finish what we started. :y:
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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Emadyville » Nov 11th, '09, 03:46

very impressive, sick rhyming, don't know how easy that would be to spit but it was written fire :y:
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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Solace » Nov 11th, '09, 03:49

Thought it was pretty sick, really liked the words used and your rhyme scheme, filled with nice multies :y:
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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 11th, '09, 03:50

Coleon wrote:sounds good, no one told me though and that thread hasn't been touched, i'll write it tonight, 10 bars?

and it's pretty cool how 2 good people face eachother in the first round


Go to rap battle section and click on the topic about the RAP TOURNAMENT or something. You'll see it. :o

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How you'd guess 10 bars? That's right. :o
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The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby classthe_king » Nov 11th, '09, 03:54

ia agree, not one of the strongest in the series but the rhymes were still dope.
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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 11th, '09, 04:31

Coleon wrote:
da.relapse.lp wrote:
Coleon wrote:sounds good, no one told me though and that thread hasn't been touched, i'll write it tonight, 10 bars?

and it's pretty cool how 2 good people face eachother in the first round


Go to rap battle section and click on the topic about the RAP TOURNAMENT or something. You'll see it. :o

Scotty and Tuna already went down! :shifty:

How you'd guess 10 bars? That's right. :o


wow man I just started writin and i'ma say you better come hard, this shit comin easy :shifty:


I can't correct my verse now. :'( It's already submitted, lol. But oh wells.
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Just Silver » Nov 11th, '09, 05:03

This is nice and a half ive gotta up my vocab lol
Multis is were its at on this forum i rather see dope multis than punches
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Re: Syllable Sorccerer

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 12th, '09, 14:53

that's very badass!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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