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16 Bars + 1 & Counting. (Limitless)

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16 Bars + 1 & Counting. (Limitless)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 12th, '09, 07:24

Just "8"-"Bars" and "Running" so I got "cramps" in "The Game"/
Representing the "Rap Olympics" so no need to "camp" with bad "flame"/
I'm the champ of all claims; your "tears" got you "damp" with the shame/
Word up: my plan was the same to show how "Stans" were so lame/
But SajN was to ban my "show name", so now I'm selling cans of cocaine/
Will "Takeover" this thread; but this time I got a shield for "Ether"/
I "yield" the "heater" so there's no need for me to feel these cheaters/
Don't know I just dissed Jay-Z? I'm so "ill" I always kiss "rabies"/
Somewhere exists a "Lady" and a big "baby" that won't say "GaGa"/
Cause mainstream is "getting on my nerves" like they "flayed my skin"/
Cause maybe I'm "spitting all these burns" in exchange for "grins"/
Laugh while I throw "punches" that cause you "personal" damage/
I murder all "save"-"ages" like my mood was "fuck the youth-less"/
Just forget all bandages and you'll think soon Big-Pun ain't ruthless/
Making "smashing" hits like carrying a "sledgehammer" to "MTV AWARDS"/
Hate me, but you're less "straight" than "Adam Sandler's banned-to-hear records"/

More feedback appreciated. :y:

And gotta give the props where it counts; this time to Canibus. :shifty:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: 16 Bars + 1 & Counting. (Limitless)

Postby gutawafang » Nov 12th, '09, 07:35

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Re: 16 Bars + 1 & Counting. (Limitless)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 13th, '09, 00:41

Bump. :sweating:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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