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Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 12th, '09, 15:34

Song means alot to me. Written at the highest and lowest points of my football career.

These sun rays shine on this page while my pen,
Flows like my clothes as they blow in the wind,
My ribs have grown sore from bone-crushing collisions,
My soul leeks like nose bleeds sending everything spinning,
No longer winning seems this time the score is against me,
Thought my spin move was sick but they got a linebacker to fix me,
Just an ounce of courage staring at all these empty seats,
I got blisters on my feet from walking around in these cleats,
Every pound of pressure weighs a ton on my shoulder,
Just let me quit now I'm done it's over,
Done ran 100 suicides but still I got nothing to show,
Even though coach says no you got two hours to go,
So I put my helmet on and snap my chinstrap,
Cut off this bloody strap from these shoulder pads on my back,
Smack me in my mouth even though my lips bleeding,
I'm gonna keep on running even though I'm not breathing,
My whole body's sore and every muscle aches,
But I'ma keep hitting you straight till even your facemask breaks,
It seems I'm way past great I'll be a legend even later,
You hear the crack of shoulder pads clash like that of gladiators,
My lip is busted open and my nose is bloody,
Coach said to never go down so get off of me,
Gotta keep pounding my legs just to get that extra yard,
Blood cover my entire jersey but what’s a war without the scars

Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand,
Now it's fall and I'm not tall but it's all that I am,
It’s all I feel I’ll ever be destined to see,
Unattainable goals that I’m destined to reach,
I sit with it rested in me unquestionably,
What’s holding me captive is all that is setting me free

"Your too small, your too weak, you're never gonna make it,
You say I can’t reach what I seek and I just can't shake it,
So just stay in Wichita Kansas and eat your cold cereal,
Just face it kid you're just not D-1 material,
Cause anyone can hit but you're just too inconsistent,
Man you almost had that tackle yeah too bad that you missed it,
You should have led your team to win but you couldn't,
You should have got up but you wouldn't, gave up when you shouldn't,
You were supposed to build the team up but you just sat in shame,
You even cried that one time after the St.Mary's game,
So what if you got hit, got up and coughed up blood,
We still expected you to carry this team knee deep in the mud,
And when you fractured your wrist and broke 3 ribs,
You should've quit but you just went back out and broke them again,

Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand,
Now it's fall and I'm not tall but it's all that I am,
It’s all I feel I’ll ever be destined to see,
Unattainable goals that I’m destined to reach,
I sit with it rested in me unquestionably,
What’s holding me captive is all that is setting me free

You call me a friend unaware of my deceitful mask,
My knees intact my helmet only completes the act,
My screams in fact only go to show I need this bad,
I only repeat the past how long will this evil last,
I manage to keep the laughs from peeking past,
My legal past seems to be all that people ask,
Watever the team'll ask, I live to be unselfish,
I'm not helpless, I just dont know what the hell help is,
Oh well it's the last time I'll ever touch this field,
I love this field,
I'll play through pain no matter how much I feel,
I want to feel that rush just once more,
Just one score, one more before I'm done for.

Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand,
Now it's fall and I'm not tall but it's all that I am,
It’s all I feel I’ll ever be destined to see,
Unattainable goals that I’m destined to reach,
I sit with it rested in me unquestionably,
What’s holding me captive is all that is setting me free
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 12th, '09, 16:10

Coleon wrote:wow man,that was one of my favorite drops i've seen in a while :y: great flow and imagery man


Thanks Col. Appreciate it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 12th, '09, 17:10

Damn Just I didn't know football meant so much to you....its such an emotional sport I know and I know you go more than 100 percent each play man good piece and it shows your emotion very well....good work...matter fact ima go as far as....lol naw good job though
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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 12th, '09, 18:37

Fa-Q wrote:Damn Just I didn't know football meant so much to you....its such an emotional sport I know and I know you go more than 100 percent each play man good piece and it shows your emotion very well....good work...matter fact ima go as far as....lol naw good job though


haha yeah thats why I be screamin so much lol. Thanks man. I laughed so hard at the caoch banks thing. Appreciate it homie
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 12th, '09, 23:36

Yah-Hah.... this made me sad. Nothing in CW has ever made me feel the pain of the author like this. This, my friend, is what hip hop is all about. This is excellence in the form of text. This is art. A masterpiece. Beautifully executed, the vocabulary was astounding. However the only thing I can fault is the flow. This is incredible. I loved every single syllable of this. :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: Favorite CW drop, ever.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 06:34

MC Anonymous wrote:Yah-Hah.... this made me sad. Nothing in CW has ever made me feel the pain of the author like this. This, my friend, is what hip hop is all about. This is excellence in the form of text. This is art. A masterpiece. Beautifully executed, the vocabulary was astounding. However the only thing I can fault is the flow. This is incredible. I loved every single syllable of this. :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: Favorite CW drop, ever.


Woah thanks homie really means alot. I guess it's really big deal with me so kinda showed. Really appreciate it means a bunch. Stay easy bro :b:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 17:37

man this was straight dope :o :o :worship: :worship:
Everything is dope multies,rhymes,vocab :worship:
Hook is fuckin awesome I really like it :y: ,dope concept 2 wit football and stuff
and yeah as other peeps said it,I can really feel the emotions on this one
when I read this after that hook it really touched me
("Your too small, your too weak, you're never gonna make it,
You say I can’t reach what I seek and I just can't shake it,)
Man dope drop :y: :y:
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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 17:59

BILI wrote:man this was straight dope :o :o :worship: :worship:
Everything is dope multies,rhymes,vocab :worship:
Hook is fuckin awesome I really like it :y: ,dope concept 2 wit football and stuff
and yeah as other peeps said it,I can really feel the emotions on this one
when I read this after that hook it really touched me
("Your too small, your too weak, you're never gonna make it,
You say I can’t reach what I seek and I just can't shake it,)
Man dope drop :y: :y:


Yo man thanks alot means so much yall are diggin it. Much love homie :b:
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Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Wic Kid » Nov 13th, '09, 18:04

Just...I dont know, man....You touched me. And not in the way Michael Jackson touches kids, but... You know what I mean.

Multies, rhyme scheme, chorus, flow, vocab, basically everything. :worship:
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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 18:09

Wic_Kid wrote:Just...I dont know, man....You touched me. And not in the way Michael Jackson touches kids, but... You know what I mean.

Multies, rhyme scheme, chorus, flow, vocab, basically everything. :worship:


Yo man thanks so much for checkin it
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 13th, '09, 20:07

Damn Jus you're getting respect left and right....and me....I have nothing *sniff* but a hand to jerg with.....and a female mannequin to fuck....but it scars my dick when I try and force my dick in its mouth....god I'm sorry this was a serious song and I fucked it up with this post
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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 20:22

I enjoyed almost every line, good drop Yah. Keep it up my native friend.
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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 03:24

Hahaha grif it's cool.

Thanks Zu my......wat race are you?
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 19:20

You have a talent for displaying emotion in your pieces in an original way. Great job. :y: :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand

Postby mcZu » Nov 14th, '09, 19:22

Yah-hah wrote:Thanks Zu my......wat race are you?

Guess :shifty:
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