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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 13th, '09, 05:56

that was quiet a nice collab :y:
all 3 of you killed it :flower:
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 06:38

Yeah dude Ya-Col-Apse.....sick homie. :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 13th, '09, 07:11

DerdyPK wrote:that was quiet a nice collab :y:
all 3 of you killed it :flower:
Yah-Cole-Lapse :worship:

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah dude Ya-Col-Apse.....sick homie. :y: :y: :y:


Thanks. :b:
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 07:15

Yo how come no one can spell my name right. :P a got a "-" and another h geez :whistle:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 13th, '09, 10:44

Goddamn that was dope....the only thing I didn't like was the quotes in Relapses verse but hey I know that's how you write so no hate.....I think all verses were fuckin equally dope good job er'yone
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 15:03

Good lookin out homie :b:
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 22:21

Dope collab, though, Mi, you're structure kinda annoys me. Cole, nice rhyme scheme, and Yah, you had that raw kind thing going on in ya verse. Mi, nice wordplay. Keep it up guys.
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 22:31

Its a dope collab guys I really like it a lot,everyone had smh good,Relapse`s wordplay is awesome :y: :y:
yah and Coleon had dope flow :y: ,great rhymes and multies in each verse 2 :y:

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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 13th, '09, 23:51

mcZu wrote:Dope collab, though, Mi, you're structure kinda annoys me. Cole, nice rhyme scheme, and Yah, you had that raw kind thing going on in ya verse. Mi, nice wordplay. Keep it up guys.


Sorry about the quotations. I was bringing J-Roc back from the dead. :smoking:
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby classthe_king » Nov 13th, '09, 23:52

This was sick, relapse this is one of your best verses, yahhah didnt come up to his standards but it was still dope. Coleon was sick all around, those first couple bars were insane.
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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 00:14

classthe_king wrote:This was sick, relapse this is one of your best verses, yahhah didnt come up to his standards but it was still dope. Coleon was sick all around, those first couple bars were insane.


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Re: Coleon - Lower Archy Feat. Yahha and Relapse

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 01:20

sorry i was resting in the lead i need a pillow and a cover, damn i just qouted wayne :'(

prety sick shit man not gonna lie
ive been busy but its nice to comeback and see shit like this still happens :y:
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