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Cerberus

Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 11:30

ILL as fuck,I rob a bank and took demon as a hostage
See I`m BILI almighty and Freeman got no courage
To try to take me down,see bitch,no one can stop me
And if you see a cop G,stab him in his fuckin eye B
Checkin that bitch down the street,and I saw her glance
See I`m bout to kill her and then do my murder dance
Called my mom to a dinner,but she was the main meal
But before I ate her,she needed to pass my pain wheel
I sold my soul to devil,but he`s week,so I want it back
I hooked him on drugs,so now he just cant quit crack
Now Ima kill for myself,I wont do business wit this monkey
He`s a joke,I`ll come to Earth and admit he`s a junkie
Its time for Cerberus to rule the hell,its D`leh,Wic Kid and BILI
See my first sentence ever was"ma` I`m sick kid so kill me"
Bad for her she never listened and missed that chance
Its time for my evil dance,after I kill you wit my death glance

This was for a collab wit me D`leh and Wic Kid,but I guess we`re not doin it so,heres my verse :whistle:
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Re: Cerberus

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 13th, '09, 11:38

Not bad....didn't like the junkie/monkey line but another than that pretty good
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Re: Cerberus

Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 11:47

Fa-Q wrote:Not bad....didn't like the junkie/monkey line but another than that pretty good

thx man ;)
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Re: Cerberus

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 13th, '09, 15:23

Yeah agree with Fa-Q. Dude the concept was brilliant I really enjoyed it. Some lines wasnt really fellin but for the most part I really dug it."Its time for Cerberus to rule the hell,its D`leh,Wic Kid and BILI
See my first sentence ever was"ma` I`m sick kid so kill me" Was my favorite line by far. Collab would have been dope. Overall nicely done. Callin the devil out was cool. Keep at it homie. :y:

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Re: Cerberus

Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 19:10

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah agree with Fa-Q. Dude the concept was brilliant I really enjoyed it. Some lines wasnt really fellin but for the most part I really dug it."Its time for Cerberus to rule the hell,its D`leh,Wic Kid and BILI
See my first sentence ever was"ma` I`m sick kid so kill me" Was my favorite line by far. Collab would have been dope. Overall nicely done. Callin the devil out was cool. Keep at it homie. :y:

P.S. please return feed on new song called "Time kinda stops with this ball in my hand" Thanks

thx man :y:
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