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Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 20:19

Boxed in, locked in with no edges
Inbox filled with messages
I’m in a box filled with blank messages
My head a mess and it adjusts
When I add just enough thoughts
I thank God and I wake up
We passed the point of making up
I remember you buying make up
And I used to tag along
This is an attack on myself through a song
Hesitating, finger above the dial and
Emotions a Stradivarius violin
Fragile yet agile ‘cause via my eye lens
I’ve seen the truth highlighted in
Various ‘you and I end’ scenarios
Part of my company, partner CEO
And now we parted see..
I could never anticipate such a scene

So why should I bother to call?
I know I’m stubborn as a brick wall
But, see, it’s my call
My love for you aint AWAL
It’s just locked up in a hall
Folded like a Hallmark card
I had to say bye like a Wal-Mart kart
Still in that dark long hall
Emotions are of the chart y’all
Side view like playing dart
My inside is plain hungry by far
It’s eating me alive under the stars
No wonder I can’t escape these bars
Even if I ask I can’t retrace
My steps are still in a race
So I step into a new phase facing
My shadows placed in
My head so I try to erase ‘em
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 20:29

Its dope man,I loved first verse better,the beginning was awesome :y: ,2nd verse is good 2,flow is good :y: ,rhymes and multies :y:,overall nice drop :y:
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 13th, '09, 20:32

Good shit Zu....is this about a gf or something....I like those lines about make up and tagging along....yea we've all been there...shopping with bitches to try and be with them good shit Zu....I'd like a third verse thatd be dope
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby Drama Setter » Nov 13th, '09, 20:34

Good job Zu as usual :y:
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 20:34

BILI wrote:Its dope man,I loved first verse better,the beginning was awesome :y: ,2nd verse is good 2,flow is good :y: ,rhymes and multies :y:,overall nice drop :y:

Thanks BILI, appreciate it.

Fa-Q wrote:Good shit Zu....is this about a gf or something....I like those lines about make up and tagging along....yea we've all been there...shopping with bitches to try and be with them good shit Zu....I'd like a third verse thatd be dope

Yeah, it's about my ex. Glad you liked it man, I might consider adding a third verse.

drama setter wrote:Good job Zu as usual :y:

Thanks Drama, appreciate it.
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby Tomega » Nov 13th, '09, 20:38

reppin Rotterdam!!!

would prefer rhyming in your mother language though. if you want beats, i can send them, so you can record..
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 20:39

Tomega wrote:reppin Rotterdam!!!

would prefer rhyming in your mother language though

I do that as well, lol. I have a freestyle recorded in dutch, and I do write in dutch once in a while.
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby Tomega » Nov 13th, '09, 20:39

do you record your rhymes?
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 20:41

Yeah, whenever I have time I do. My quality sucks though, I've got one shitty ass mic.

And thanks for the beats offer. :y:
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby AliJack » Nov 13th, '09, 21:29

ex..? what happened zu?
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby mcZu » Nov 13th, '09, 21:35

AliJack wrote:ex..? what happened zu?

Check ''Where Did It Go Wrong?''
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 03:26

Dope flow homie. one of those bob ya head to the beat flows. Nice emotion too bro. Keep it comin man :y:
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:44

alwys loving your shit homie :y:
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Re: Untitled Notes

Postby mcZu » Nov 14th, '09, 19:03

Yah-hah wrote:Dope flow homie. one of those bob ya head to the beat flows. Nice emotion too bro. Keep it comin man :y:

Thanks, Yah, appreciate it. :y:

Spyder wrote:alwys loving your shit homie :y:

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