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Postby BILI » Nov 13th, '09, 21:54

Ok bitch I`m drunk as fuck on this fuckin Hennessy
I want you to watch while I`m killin my fuckin enemies
I want you to remember me,be in your life time memories
Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs
While you beg on your knees,but see I`m just doin my thang
I`ll attack you wit RPG and you still wont go out wit a bang
I hope you see that this is dope,or I`ll have to reveal my skill
Then put your head in my toilet and make you feel my shit
I want to record this cause this even exceeds the elite
All I need a good beat for this,like heart needs a beat
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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 14th, '09, 00:58

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Re: Rising

Postby lilrossy » Nov 14th, '09, 03:16

BILI wrote:Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs
:y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 14th, '09, 11:29

^^ :y:
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Re: Rising

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 11:33

Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs
Sick. Also the roliet line was dope. Dug it. for a drunk/keystyle was pretty fly. Hahaha B is drunk lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 14th, '09, 11:43

Yah-hah wrote:Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs
Sick. Also the roliet line was dope. Dug it. for a drunk/keystyle was pretty fly. Hahaha B is drunk lol
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thx man,I was drunk yesterday,I talked shit all over the forum,lmao
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Re: Rising

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 11:44

BILI wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs
Sick. Also the roliet line was dope. Dug it. for a drunk/keystyle was pretty fly. Hahaha B is drunk lol
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thx man,I was drunk yesterday,I talked shit all over the forum,lmao


hahaha yeah I know wat you mean :drunksigning:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 14th, '09, 11:59

Yah-hah wrote:
BILI wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs
Sick. Also the roliet line was dope. Dug it. for a drunk/keystyle was pretty fly. Hahaha B is drunk lol
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thx man,I was drunk yesterday,I talked shit all over the forum,lmao


hahaha yeah I know wat you mean :drunksigning:

:y: (it works here)
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Re: Rising

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 12:01

^LMFAO :worship:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 14th, '09, 20:18

bumpin :whistle:
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Re: Rising

Postby MCyobi » Nov 14th, '09, 21:12

this was really good,a lot of multies :worship:
and I liked:
I want you to remember me,be in your life time memories
Its November and I`m about to dismember some MCs

Then put your head in my toilet and make you feel my shit

All I need a good beat for this,like heart needs a beat

smart stuff :worship:
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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 14th, '09, 21:51

^^thx
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Re: Rising

Postby embm » Nov 15th, '09, 00:20

gr8 shit rhymes...
4 a second there i thught i was readin a 2pac lyrc :o
tats complaint ;) :flower: good job :y:
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Re: Rising

Postby BILI » Nov 15th, '09, 00:47

embm wrote:gr8 shit rhymes...
4 a second there i thught i was readin a 2pac lyrc :o
tats complaint ;) :flower: good job :y:

thx a lot girl :y: :y:
after all Pac is my fav rapper ;)
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