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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 03:01

Scott M wrote:not serious, just humour. was gonna do 40 lines but got bored, you'll be able to tell lol ..

forty 'bars' will have him 'dizzier' than walking through 'Ibiza'
my second bar, will get it started, Cole, it's nice to meet ya
so, now's the time to treat ya to a lovely slice of pizza
then off to ride the teacups, bring a missile with a seeker
hitler has your helmet, and he really wants to greet ya ..
he really wants to teach ya what it's like to be a preacher
hitler's homophobic, so you will be friends for life
and when your home alone, asleep inside your bed of lice
he'll come between the sheets, and then he'll set your head alight
he'll give you 'head delight', dang, look a little less surprised ..

*sing along with me now*

Coleon and Hitler sitting in a tree
Try-ing on hel-mets, oh oh gee ..


i don't know what to say anymore, because he did it
he knocked on hitler's door, and he went and got his digits
one knee to the floor, and then coleon was crying
he couldn't ask for more, all the helmet's then admired him
a round of applause, there us no use in denying
and if he says he didn't do it, then Coleon is lying ..


Coleon's my man, but the chorus is hilarious. :laughing:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Wic Kid » Nov 14th, '09, 03:05

I like it, its funny. Especially the chorus. But...

my second bar, will get it started, Cole, it's nice to meet ya
so, now's the time to treat ya to a lovely slice of pizza


Dont you think you kinda bit Em there? As The World Turns?... :unsure:
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Wic Kid » Nov 14th, '09, 03:11

Coleon wrote:bitin Em in a diss to me....wtf is this Tuni?


Tuni? :confusion:
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:26

y u go dont like eachother..........

i wanna see some hardcore shit go down in the CW, thats the place for it
not pictures of helmet hair lol

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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 03:37

Yeah man Col is my homie and Scotty is my dude by this was pretty funny. Epic Chorus lmao
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:45

ayo Scotty how much u bench press :smoking:
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 03:46

Scott M wrote:i'm not talking about that, i'm saying that you may excel me in text battling. but when it comes to the following.

running
lifting
fighting
socialising
getting girls
getting laid
drinking
partying

i'm 100% certain that i excel you.


No offense, but this is the internet. Anyone can say anything, really, and no one gives a fuck. :n:
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:48

65kg.......... ima check what that is hahahahaha

Scotty :unsure: i checked it, that 145 lbs... i bench 250 lbs
which i checked is 113kg... better hit that bench champ ;)
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 03:52

you prolly curl more tho, i focuse on bench
how much u curl?
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 03:55

I been doin 145pounds since freshman year in football. You should get on that AMERICAN FOOTBALL training homie. :o
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 04:04

no disrespect to you Scotty but i was benching 135lbs in 8th grade and my best friends was doing 165.... course hes doing 280 now :o yea hes crazy but yeah...

18 kg is 39lbs, is that with one hand dumbells or on a bar?
i got 45 lbs one handed and 100lbs two hands
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 04:04

Scott M wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:I been doin 145pounds since freshman year in football. You should get on that AMERICAN FOOTBALL training homie. :o


lol we don't get that here. it's all about soccer here :smoking:


Ha yeah I know man just messin. I might have to go over there and rock my soccer skills :p I'm pretty good. Basically its just cause I'm so fast. Ran a 4.35 forty at a football combine last summer. Thats 4.35 seconds running 120 feet or 40 tards. Not sure which is easier for you to convert :sweating:
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 04:09

ight then yea thats about what i do

and i hear ya man, im not very toned
so its decieving people try ta step to me :devil:
but yea i should get a picture of my friend on here hes cut as well as strong lol
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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby Spyder » Nov 14th, '09, 06:01

thats my boy Trevor.... he out lifts me in everything to do with upperbody except shoulder/upper back

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Re: Coleon Diss

Postby mcZu » Nov 14th, '09, 20:33

If you want to have a good shaped upper body you should get on that Muy Thai training.
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