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Picture a World. (Where's our rights?)

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Picture a World. (Where's our rights?)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 09:16

They say it's innocent before proven guilty...
They say everyone gets a right to a trial...
They say that racial discrimination is illegal...
They say you have the right to remain silent...
I say fuck that and let's start over.

Picture a secular democracy run by a Communist Muslim/
Criminals in deep depression 'cause cops too few to gun with/
Picture a world in which all ethnicities must live together/
Sin together, win together; natural balance thin as leather/
Picture a time when all you hear in Harlem is the silence/
When there are no more petty thugs, just Parliament violence/
Picture a place where yin and yang could be quickly reversed/
No need to explain terrible events; we're simply just cursed/
Picture large fields of opium being playgrounds for our children/
Islamic law demolished and where prostitutes laid on the sultan/
Picture the US smiling when terrorist attacks were on the news/
When the world discovered it wasn't Germans who killed the Jews/
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Picture a World. (Where's our rights?)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 14th, '09, 10:17

Uh-oh watch out. The government is gettin on this one. :p Dope track man. Nice concept. Flow was good, couple multis, really it was the thought of it that worked. Nicely done and briliantly worded. Keep rockin these controversial scripts homie.

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Re: Picture a World. (Where's our rights?)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 19:19

Yah-hah wrote:Uh-oh watch out. The government is gettin on this one. :p Dope track man. Nice concept. Flow was good, couple multis, really it was the thought of it that worked. Nicely done and briliantly worded. Keep rockin these controversial scripts homie.

ps Check out the two new joints por favor. Thanks :b:


Feedback looking good. :flower:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Picture a World. (Where's our rights?)

Postby Wic Kid » Nov 14th, '09, 19:32

Great job. This is not your usual flow, and its better this way. Your lines are shorter. I really dug the concept. Not too much multies, but it was better that way. Overall, :y:

Another proof that you and Yah rule the CW section lately. Keep it up. :8)
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Re: Picture a World. (Where's our rights?)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 14th, '09, 19:33

Wic_Kid wrote:Great job. This is not your usual flow, and its better this way. Your lines are shorter. I really dug the concept. Not too much multies, but it was better that way. Overall, :y:

Another proof that you and Yah rule the CW section lately. Keep it up. :8)


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Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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