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I Killed Her

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Re: I Killed Her

Postby BILI » Nov 15th, '09, 17:59

Its really good drop :y:,good rhymes,flow had some downs,but it was good :y:
i'm lost, i'm left walking on hot sand with no sandals
i can't handle it, i'm sick of laying my back on these candles
:worship:
overall nice piece :y:
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Re: I Killed Her

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 15th, '09, 18:05

Scott M wrote:i'm dismantled and stuck, there is no turning this handle
i try to force open the door, i'm trapped in this scandal
i'm lost, i'm left walking on hot sand with no sandals
i can't handle it, i'm sick of laying my back on these candles
there's nothing i can do, they talk in a derogatory sense
i don't agree with them at all, so i just have to pretend
i'm just nodding along, angry, especially when
they laugh about the person who was found, dead this weekend
i'd never pretend to agree with this, it's deadly as sin
i'm just a hypocrite, contradicted myself, it's deadened my skin
it doesn't matter if that girl and i were never gon' be friends
that doesn't make it right, so i'ma go to bed with this pen
and write in her memory, even though i'm the one who killed her
i'm rinsing the bad out of me, i see it all running through the filter ..

Sadistic. Lol Nothing out of the norm for scotty boy though. :confusion:
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Re: I Killed Her

Postby Emadyville » Nov 15th, '09, 18:14

"I don't agree with them all so I just have to pretend" was my favorite line, that really stood out, great piece, loved the first 4 bars :y:
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Re: I Killed Her

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 19:56

That hot sand and no sandals good shit....*sniff* I wish I woulda thought of that cause that was really good
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Re: I Killed Her

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 15th, '09, 19:56

That hot sand and no sandals good shit....*sniff* I wish I woulda thought of that cause that was really good
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Re: I Killed Her

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 16th, '09, 10:09

i've allways liked your laid back style of rhymin man, even your battle disses, just the way you write makes shit seem more personal.
the verse was good, nice rhymes, flow structure, everything was wiked
sick shit
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: I Killed Her

Postby gutawafang » Nov 16th, '09, 10:19

flow was quite good. concept is perfect though I don't like the title.

this is a nice punch: i'm rinsing the bad out of me, i see it all running through the filter

overall dope. :worship:
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