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Your over and who cared....

Postby Just Silver » Nov 28th, '09, 05:07

A sick "bachelor" who should and "wood" lacquer ya
kind to "doctor" your wounds come back and keep stabbing the
slit while im grabbing a,switch blade and a pin,
six days, i begin, to stitch these words of hate through your skin
ink boils, im baking the pen, so hot my sweat cant be tranquil again,
six weeks "flies" past,.. I've had it i turn back to the mattress to end this "maggot", subtle yet abrupt, i tell groups to "get up out.. bounce"
"except you next to the one in the white blouse", "Haven't we met"
before you have a chance, doors suddenly slam blood pours again
out from your hands,shout out again,i love misery
watching you squirm is so the shit for me, whats your favorite subject
click clack mines "history".. and as you begin to bleed i will stomp again
fuck your wife your kids, and taunt your friends in this, flaunting end
you are done for good, my lesson 25 years, my wesson takes
you and who cares?



Quick Shizzle trying to do more stuff..
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Re: Who cared in my mind?

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 28th, '09, 05:09

A sick "bachelor" who should and "wood" lacquer ya
kind to "doctor" your wounds come back and keep stabbing the
slit while im grabbing a,switch blade and a pin,
six days, i begin, to stitch these words of hate through your skin


i thought that was a dope ass line(s), give ya props, i liked it alot :flower: also i feel like a jackass saying this but can you check out mine?
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Re: Who cared in my mind?

Postby Just Silver » Nov 28th, '09, 05:11

bullet_boy46 wrote:
A sick "bachelor" who should and "wood" lacquer ya
kind to "doctor" your wounds come back and keep stabbing the
slit while im grabbing a,switch blade and a pin,
six days, i begin, to stitch these words of hate through your skin


i thought that was a dope ass line(s), give ya props, i liked it alot :flower: also i feel like a jackass saying this but can you check out mine?

did before u said anything
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Re: Who cared in my mind?

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 28th, '09, 05:12

3m1n3m Silver wrote:
bullet_boy46 wrote:
A sick "bachelor" who should and "wood" lacquer ya
kind to "doctor" your wounds come back and keep stabbing the
slit while im grabbing a,switch blade and a pin,
six days, i begin, to stitch these words of hate through your skin


i thought that was a dope ass line(s), give ya props, i liked it alot :flower: also i feel like a jackass saying this but can you check out mine?

did before u said anything

lmao
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Re: Your over and who cared....

Postby Emadyville » Nov 28th, '09, 05:43

The "mines history" line was dope as fuck :worship:

Overall this pretty good but madddd short :8)
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Re: Your over and who cared....

Postby Just Silver » Nov 28th, '09, 05:46

Emadyville wrote:The "mines history" line was dope as fuck :worship:

Overall this pretty good but madddd short :8)

thanks i just tried something real quick tryin put out more stuff
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Re: Your over and who cared....

Postby Just Silver » Nov 29th, '09, 04:05

1st outta 2 bumps lol i plan this out
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Re: Your over and who cared....

Postby Just Silver » Nov 29th, '09, 18:15

last bump for this one :sweating:
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Re: Your over and who cared....

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:09

Some dope wordplay in this one. I'm diggin it man for real pretty nice
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