My Final Love Letter ~PLEASE FEED :(~
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Re: My Final Love Letter ~PLEASE FEED :(~
by Yah-hah » Dec 2nd, '09, 01:55
Dope. honestly the flow was so damn smooth man. Beautifully composed man one of the best I can remember from you. You writing about a particular girl or just in general? was just wonderin. Anyways bro good piece man really
"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah
Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol
Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: My Final Love Letter ~PLEASE FEED :(~
by eminemgirl1234 » Dec 2nd, '09, 17:20
Love It!
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...
Malina a.k.a Mickey
"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...
Malina a.k.a Mickey
"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: My Final Love Letter ~PLEASE FEED :(~
by j2dat » Dec 2nd, '09, 19:32
very nice, some nice lines in there bro, keep that shit up...
"might become a reality, this verse, this letter, this is it
this shit is a tragedy, lifes a bitch, just dont know if i can live with it.."
ill drop a piece later tonight.
Mary Jane knock I answer with open arms (hello?)
And every weekend's a smoke-a-thon - Banks
You know Oprah got In Da Club on her iPod
She don't want me on her show though I guess I'm too hard
She sat Kanye West down, and talked about his crash
But she don't wanna talk about the bullets in my ass - 50 Cent
And every weekend's a smoke-a-thon - Banks
You know Oprah got In Da Club on her iPod
She don't want me on her show though I guess I'm too hard
She sat Kanye West down, and talked about his crash
But she don't wanna talk about the bullets in my ass - 50 Cent
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