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The Return of Requiem

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The Return of Requiem

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 04:13

I'm back again, which one you fucker's missed me?
i'm still sickening, that's a part of my history,
i'll leave u physically and mentally in misery,
a mystery to solve which you won't live to see.
i'm an evil being, something wrought from the depths,
you see me in ur nightmares, then on ur front steps.
think just a week ago, you had a whole life left,
now ur more fucked than someone having sex.
but before you see the light at the end of the tunnel,
i'ma stuff your mouth with acid dripping through a funnel,
leave your insides outside in a gory a puddle,
the expression on ur face is broken like a puzzle.
now its time to bury you in your own back yard,
here lies a man you won't recognize he's so scarred,
a few years from now , when someone digs up the gard-,
-en, they won't even recognize the human body parts.




haha keystyled that shit and i'm so using it on a verse somewhere :smoking:
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Re: The Return of Requiem

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 04:26

welcome back! lol

i liked it man, had some nice lines in there 2...lemme know when u put it all together.

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but before you see the light at the end of the tunnel,
i'ma stuff your mouth with acid dripping through a funnel,
leave your insides outside in a gory a puddle,
the expression on ur face is broken like a puzzle.


:y:
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Re: The Return of Requiem

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 04:27

j2deezy wrote:welcome back! lol

i liked it man, had some nice lines in there 2...lemme know when u put it all together.

fav lines:

but before you see the light at the end of the tunnel,
i'ma stuff your mouth with acid dripping through a funnel,
leave your insides outside in a gory a puddle,
the expression on ur face is broken like a puzzle.


:y:


thx man! it feels good to be back.... havin my own relapse of sorts :y:
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Re: The Return of Requiem

Postby j2dat » Dec 6th, '09, 05:04

i can def feel you on that lol..i juz started recording again..last time i did anything was 05..im a tad rusty
still but workin the kinks out n all lol...

keep it up bro
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Re: The Return of Requiem

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:26

It's about time you came back to the streets homie lol. Good shit man, first lines were dope. Glad to see you droppin again.
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Re: The Return of Requiem

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 05:39

Yah-hah wrote:It's about time you came back to the streets homie lol. Good shit man, first lines were dope. Glad to see you droppin again.

and it feels good to be back, thanks man :smoking:
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