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Deadly Escape.

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Deadly Escape.

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 13th, '09, 04:38

come from a deadly escape
leading my ways, deadliest games are tense and it pays
sentence upon sentence upon sentence I gave
people rather leave it, breathe it in with their pain
I walk into the precinct that I'm wanted and spray
cause I can't stand the shame, it is haunting my brain
So I blast and I pull, reload and blow too
with the blood in my eyes, show dudes I know you
and everybody else inside this place, expose truth
I flee after kills, and I call from a phone booth
supposed too, tell you that I love you too
when all you do is ridicule, all the help and jewels
fuck you, so I can tell you I hate you
called you, hows it feel to be a mistake dude?
bullets and I pull it, hang up the phone and I shoot it
cops and sirens crying in the skies and my mind is loosing...
It's different what I wanted too be
a celebrity living it big with all my memories
Instead I'm driving with this blood on my palms
cop sirens behind me from the lust I have lost
above and beyond, in retrospect, I'm already gone
I'm longing, for another fight I can con-
quer, but the bouncers of my motherfucking mind,
kicking me out, lifting with shouts, fallen behind
shoot the window to the side, and I'm leaning with shots
hit the cop with a glock, just to even the odds
the cop car swerves and burns, in flames and turns
with a glow in my eyes, and my brain is burned
I jump out of my car, going faster then I
body rolling on the pavement, the matter is dry
I shattered my thighs, get up and I walk to heat
other coppers coming quick, like their stalking me
Even though I'm in pain, I admit defeat
and spit at least, on the face of the deceased
say peace, and leave in the breeze of heat
jump into the flames, and it's freezing knees
footsteps of the cops coming, the shots busting
I'm not running, I must fucking got something
I got hit in the leg, but I stand and wave
with a smile on my face, and it stays engraved
On my chest plate lies a C4, I seem bored
smiling and talking and walking; before
I activate the switch, bust a shot in the cop
they bum-rush the surroundings, glocks are then popped
shot 50 times, everybody shooting and shooting
one hit the ignition and lives are loosing
I fall to the pavement, Holding on a paycheck
got from a rapist, that didn't get paid yet
telling the police but they didn't believe it
was to listen then I wouldn't be bleeding
took my vindictive nature and teamed with
people that would listen, clip and beam shit
explosions and killing, and took my revenge
now I'm in a city, with the hoods and the benz
with explosions on my chest, that are ready to blow
people didn't know, I would be this deadly to show
I breathed a final time, and I pulled it and cried
exploded all the city, all the lives and wives
their lies are fried, and everything about them, gone
all because you didn't listen, you worthless pawns
I'll be laughing on my way to hell, to let you know
when you get there, it was all a game, you know....
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Deadly Escape.

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '09, 04:49

That was really dope. Maybe I'm just in a different state of mind, but I just read it so slowly and every single line was great. There was so much imagery. Didn't end off as I wished it had, felt a little too simple...And just wasn't complete for me. But, the piece in entirety was great. Keep it up MC Anonymous.
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Re: Deadly Escape.

Postby Emadyville » Dec 13th, '09, 04:56

Yeah like Solace said, each line kinda had this idk, something about it, like each line itself was a story if that makes sense, i actually like how it ended, as well as the ending with the all a game line, very interesting read, and one of my favorite from you :y: :y:
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