death desired

[hottone123]

This world of mine is burned away
as these black tears lose control.
Laying on this peace I slowly die
as my heart becomes a black hole.

I can feel the needles in my back
as the chains hang higher than before.
Lifting me slowly up to the sky
I watch as the ravens begin to soar.

The blood flows from my skin
as I can feel the droplets fall..
So many times I have failed
but I'm afraid I've given it my all.

I have let my own dreams down
as I'm hung from this loneliness.
Abandoned I lie here shaken
not knowing if I can survive this..

My hands are stained with guilt
waiting for the day I can be free.
My memories overwhelm my mind
wishing somehow I can find me..

[em16]

me like it man.. sounds like some of my own lyrics..

[EmFan4Life]

i think its good
its, as u say 'dark and demented' lol

[Ivy]

Damn, did you put a lot of thought into this. Reminds me of some of my old lyrics aswell, but I haven't written anything in like 2 months, but I'm considering picking up the habit again. But anyways, great shit.

[shady_soldierz]

http://www.trshady.com/phpbb2/viewtopic.php?t=6918

dont try anything funny...


not bad btw

[Ivy]

http://www.trshady.com/phpbb2/viewtopic.php?t=6918

dont try anything funny...


not bad btw

Very observant Shady_Soldierz... I remembered a thread and I agree... don't try anything funny.

[hottone123]

[quote="shady_soldierz"]http://www.trshady.com/phpbb2/viewtopic.php?t=6918

dont try anything funny...


not bad btw[/ no man just when i was depressd i wrote that dont worry im not sucidal or anything

[Ivy]

http://www.trshady.com/phpbb2/viewtopic.php?t=6918

dont try anything funny...


not bad btw[/ no man just when i was depressd i wrote that dont worry im not sucidal or anything

Aight.......Just got ta make sure ya know.