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Postby D'Leh » Dec 14th, '09, 17:38

this instrumental works to set up my potential verse,
my inconsiquential curse, it filles the essential words,
the works, fuck the wolrd, im killin this whole universe,
lost in my mind, but i murdered those that went to search,
chop them down like a birch, i dont wait in here, i lurk,
this beats got me spilling the verse, filling the herse,
im killin the dictionary, yea im fuckin killin the words.
i got lyrics in mind just forming the morrbid lines,
the horrid rhymes, the fear in your eyes shows more in the light,
i flow more in the night, but the darkness is more of a fight,
but i guess thats what i get for puttin my lyrics more into fright.
theese scripts i spit hit like kicks from jet lee to lil kids,
its like shit, who else spits like this? hits like this?
who puts the hop in ya bitch? i do, i put the drop in my scripts,
i kill the hot for the sick, and murder the top for a switch,
im on top now, and nobody gonna make me ever fucking flinch,
im throwin lyrical gunshot wounds, you aint gonna kill me wit a pinch.
yea, like that.
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Like That

Postby Emadyville » Dec 14th, '09, 18:50

How long you been writing?
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Like That

Postby D'Leh » Dec 14th, '09, 19:44

1 year so?
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Re: Like That

Postby BILI » Dec 14th, '09, 20:07

This was pretty cool man,I liked first part more,it flowed dope,and had nice multies :y:
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