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Fuck It

Postby AOBrien09 » Dec 15th, '09, 18:17

Light my fag aka cigarette, when a get stressed,
though I never quit, hey hoe, oops does that disrespect your sex,
aka gender so am meant'ta be a male shovenist pig now,
like paraplegic's climbing wall's you can't get over this shit woah,
oops offended again, you act like a was kicking pregnant women,
but the dumb thing, is, it's just words and verbs in the end,
criticism come's in herd's when hater's come in, turn and bend
my phrases, try too play is, like my lyric's are contagious and you're the medicine,
hell no, better watch the water your treading in, cause embarrassing
it's gonna get if you start harassing me, stop me, from trashin'em,
I ain't being cocky am just stating what anyone would do,
when they annoyed and pissed, a person can be a fool, or two
can be, boy this shit, is a lesson replayed through and through,
but she say she done nothing shit's getting fucking stupid,
disrespecting and bitching she supposed to be my fucking cupid,
twist is she told me to call her a hoe,
bitches a don't get you at all anymo' ,

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Re: Fuck It

Postby D'Leh » Dec 15th, '09, 19:36

Great job man, really tight, the strtucture and the flow we're awesome, tell me what you think of this viewtopic.php?f=24&t=74099
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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