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Unknown zone

Postby ARTILLERY » Jan 18th, '06, 13:19

Have u ever been? to the unknown zone that is.
turn ur mental channel just pass all the fizz.
now pepole who don't like the unkown i strongly advise to leave the channel alone, but for those who are with me welcome to the unkown zone.
some people are prone to enter this zone alone.
i have several times in my life and i find myself just trying to strife to find my next mark, cause this zone is kinda dark.
every once in awhile you will see a spark somewhere out in the sea of dark.
but i have come to find an even tone in this zone
i've come to like it in the darkest part
this spark i've found is all around it's really standing it's ground
and so you enter the next stage where you can see a light, now with all your might try to fight the urge to search for the light cause the time ain't right
sit back and enjoy this part of the zone cause you're no longer alone in the unknown zone
now it get's tricky cuse most people are picky and they will try to quiz themself back to the fizz
i don't know what else to say excpet just live day to day
let fate take it''s course and try and be a sport don't watch your watch
let time go by on it's own time and wait for the right time to yearn for the light that shines so bright in the
unknown zone
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Postby em16 » Jan 18th, '06, 13:22

this is good man.. just keep it up.. :D
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