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The Way It Is

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The Way It Is

Postby Tash8 » Dec 16th, '09, 03:37

*singing*
It's the way that it is (the way that it is)
feel my pain feel my hurt the angst in my words
It's the way that it is (the way that it is)
and i promise yeah I (promise)
that i ain't never stoppin till i'm ready to leave this earth
It's the way that it is (the way that it is)
(the way that it is)


When you see me so defiant There's no sense in even tryin'
Stopping me from breathing means two beings will be dying
now,
i'd be lying if I didn't say that i had weaknesses to spare
but i'm not the type of dude that's gonna set there and complain
I do the best with what I've got, whether you fucks like it or not
it's unlikely that it'll stop it's the way that it is,
it's the way I live life I aint needy for your help
I already got me by myside, i dont need no body else
my confidence is up, they say i'm way too fuckin cocky
->that's cause in my mind i'm thinking nobody can stop me
well why should i think otherwise?- should i just be a doormat?
and get stepped on everytime i welcome you in my home, man?
cause i'm one of the chillest-- you'll ever meet
but got a low boiling point -- of seventy degrees
and i-- been known to get my temper-ature hea--ted
so close your fuckin mouth 'fore you lose your fuckin teeth 'nd
I ain't no fuckin dentist but be careful when you speak bitch



again with the simple rhymes, but i much prefer this style, i can focus more on my flow and delivery.
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Re: The Way It Is

Postby Emadyville » Dec 16th, '09, 03:50

Yeah I liked it, when I realized you were going simple it forced to look more at content then rhymes, well written homie :smoking:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: The Way It Is

Postby Tash8 » Dec 16th, '09, 10:41

thx bro
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Re: The Way It Is

Postby Slim Zaddy » Dec 17th, '09, 12:04

i love it man ,, ilove the emotions in it ,, :y: good piece
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