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2pac

Postby Edge » Dec 17th, '09, 00:27

i like 2pac but by all means im not a huge fan... one day however i just kept thinking of shit that 2pac wouldve said so i decided to take my favorite 2pac song "ambitionz as a ryder" and write to it as if i was 2pac... id appreciate feedback bc i tried to get creative

im tired of shifty friends who claim they got ya back,
but when push comes to shove, they run like theyr on track,
everybody changing, only look out for themselves,
so im screamin fuck the world, all of yal could rot in cells
i wouldnt post bail, learned to go hard just for me
cuz now all of a sudden, my homies r enimies
and its crazy, i was there when they needed favors
they needed some back and i was right there with my razorz
i try actin, like its all just in my head
but in all reality, they really want me dead
i heard gunshots fired, than i hit the floor
when i looked up, they bust in through the door
they wasnt real, shoulda seen tht from the start
and now im layin here with some bullets in my heart
and everywhere i go, gotta look over my shouldaa
all this pressures buildin, heavy as a bouldaa
and thats the reason, i keep my glock cocked
they screamin out badboy, they bout to get rocked
west side for life, representing death row
tupacalypse forever, outsidaz, lets go
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: 2pac

Postby nasty » Dec 17th, '09, 00:44

not bad...
i try to do stuff like that sometimes but it always ends up sounding more like me than whoever it's supposed to
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Re: 2pac

Postby Edge » Dec 17th, '09, 01:50

nasty wrote:not bad...
i try to do stuff like that sometimes but it always ends up sounding more like me than whoever it's supposed to


haha thanks man, did it remind u at all like something 2pac would spit?
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Re: 2pac

Postby nasty » Dec 19th, '09, 19:20

yeah from what i've heard of him
you glass chins
i'll snap shins
and strap you to turntables you fables
now let's see who can sit and spin
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