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Runnin' - proper personal shit

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Runnin' - proper personal shit

Postby Cookzee » Dec 18th, '09, 01:45

when i was younger, my mother always took me to church
said i wasn't like my brother, it's the truth and it hurt
alienated by your siblings, alienated from eath
i had nobody by my side, no-one put in the work
i almost thought it was me, felt i deserved all the dirt
that pressed and kicked at me, kissing the curb
but i learnt as i grew older, my purpose from birth
it was to nurture these kids, who like me they where turfed
between they unloving familys and and social groups worse
who would make em do shit that's stupid, life in the urban
aint as easy as you think, you could be up in herse
so many people tryna get out, reciting they verse
nurse tell me before i pass, is this a gift or curse
did god give me this to emerge?
survival is taught by the survivors, not by those who benefitted.
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Re: Runnin' - proper personal shit

Postby -[Zach]- » Dec 18th, '09, 10:26

i liked it. it had a lot of feeling and emotion in it. seems like some parts didn't fit syllabalwise but its all good. keep up the good work man :y: .
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: Runnin' - proper personal shit

Postby Cookzee » Dec 18th, '09, 20:11

bump
survival is taught by the survivors, not by those who benefitted.
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Re: Runnin' - proper personal shit

Postby Cookzee » Dec 20th, '09, 23:54

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