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Nimbus - Word Art

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 18th, '09, 04:18

hop-hopology misogynous, my ginzu's fitted polished tip
will author sodomy, till ya spinal column's offed and clipped
watch in the metropolis, no one is sane but the most solemnest
no pain, problem solvers wit, varicose veins grip the martyr's pen

fuckin rare....when ya'll can't nod ya head and bob to this
knowledge filled, college kids, talk shit but they innocuous
stop it Nim, they cliques soft...like some cuddle bears
they can't take this shit...spit rhymes into the funnel chair

ya'll all unprepared, like all parents were fo' text sex
spit sick, you next best, like Olympics is to X Fest
rip swift, so catch breaths, like the obese kids up in Gym Class
all these Dicks'll get Butkus, so like Bruno they a kiss ass

judo when I kick back, relax, put on some Craig David
this guy in skinny jeans, drinkin wine gettin his chest shaven
I'm Wes Craven, but I'm the dream and you a "nightmare"
that means you can't hang with the "Penn" yo it's quite clear


last line is a UFC reference :y:
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby classthe_king » Dec 18th, '09, 04:21

Vocab is great, punches are alright. This is pretty much just a great lyrical piece. Couldn't see it rapped though.
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby DƎRDYPK » Dec 18th, '09, 04:22

very dope verse :y:
nothing else I can really say about it :happy:
the last 2 bars were my favorite..
Nimbus_9 wrote:
judo when I kick back, relax, put on some Craig David
this guy in skinny jeans, drinkin wine gettin his chest shaven
I'm Wes Craven, but I'm the dream and you a "nightmare"
that means you can't hang with the "Penn" yo it's quite clear
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 18th, '09, 04:23

Don't try to impress the reader with extensive vocabulary, if you did. :y:

Very nice piece though. I liked it.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 18th, '09, 04:25

Relapse.LP wrote:Don't try to impress the reader with extensive vocabulary, if you did. :y:

Very nice piece though. I liked it.


there's like what? four semi big words?

DerdyPK wrote:very dope verse :y:
nothing else I can really say about it :happy:
the last 2 bars were my favorite..
Nimbus_9 wrote:
judo when I kick back, relax, put on some Craig David
this guy in skinny jeans, drinkin wine gettin his chest shaven
I'm Wes Craven, but I'm the dream and you a "nightmare"
that means you can't hang with the "Penn" yo it's quite clear


thanks man :y:

classthe_king wrote:Vocab is great, punches are alright. This is pretty much just a great lyrical piece. Couldn't see it rapped though.


hmm well I rap it just fine, didn't right it to a beat but I can flow it none the less, thanks man :y:
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 18th, '09, 04:27

Nimbus_9 wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:Don't try to impress the reader with extensive vocabulary, if you did. :y:

Very nice piece though. I liked it.


there's like what? four semi big words?

DerdyPK wrote:very dope verse :y:
nothing else I can really say about it :happy:
the last 2 bars were my favorite..
Nimbus_9 wrote:
judo when I kick back, relax, put on some Craig David
this guy in skinny jeans, drinkin wine gettin his chest shaven
I'm Wes Craven, but I'm the dream and you a "nightmare"
that means you can't hang with the "Penn" yo it's quite clear


thanks man :y:

classthe_king wrote:Vocab is great, punches are alright. This is pretty much just a great lyrical piece. Couldn't see it rapped though.


hmm well I rap it just fine, didn't right it to a beat but I can flow it none the less, thanks man :y:

If you weren't, cool it. I meant no offense, because it sounded forced in my ears.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 18th, '09, 04:33

Relapse.LP wrote:If you weren't, cool it. I meant no offense, because it sounded forced in my ears.


well I mean if you're talking about misogynous then I got all those bars from rhyming with metropolis, and if you're talking about something else...idk what to tell ya, and it's all about how I say it I guess, some multis are forced but if you say them like I do they sound better (Canibus and Em do ths for example)
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby FAME » Dec 18th, '09, 04:40

Totally got the UFC reference :y: but yeah I dunno about the others, but I felt the flow. A Canibus like flow right? The vocab wasn't to big in that sense for me. I really dig it, certainly will be reading more of your stuff, and I have to agree with Derdy those four bars are my favorite part.
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 18th, '09, 04:47

FAME wrote:Totally got the UFC reference :y: but yeah I dunno about the others, but I felt the flow. A Canibus like flow right? The vocab wasn't to big in that sense for me. I really dig it, certainly will be reading more of your stuff, and I have to agree with Derdy those four bars are my favorite part.


well I only dropped some "big words" because Fa-Q said step up my vocab or something and I wanted to show him I could it just didn't appeal to me

and I don't wanna sound like Bis :'( and you guys liked the part I pretty much keystyled lol
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Re: Nimbus - Word Art

Postby FAME » Dec 18th, '09, 04:49

Nimbus_9 wrote:
FAME wrote:Totally got the UFC reference :y: but yeah I dunno about the others, but I felt the flow. A Canibus like flow right? The vocab wasn't to big in that sense for me. I really dig it, certainly will be reading more of your stuff, and I have to agree with Derdy those four bars are my favorite part.


well I only dropped some "big words" because Fa-Q said step up my vocab or something and I wanted to show him I could it just didn't appeal to me

and I don't wanna sound like Bis :'( and you guys liked the part I pretty much keystyled lol


:console: There there, I thought it was really good, don't cry :flower:
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