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J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

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J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 24th, '09, 21:25

Hey Roc, can't write, go back to rollin and smokin trees,
I break your legs, til your femurs poke through yer knees,
You're about as ill, as the contraction I will,
You keep droppin, I don't know why you try still,
Bout as ill as a fuckin bald cancer patient,
Swallowin' Anonomous cum, wonderin where the taste went,
Now that aint no shot at Anon, for you to try and play on,
How's being in a slump feel, I bet you feel like drawin a blank,
Cunt, your about as useless or useful, as bra on a skank
That Roc, Bitch drowned doing doggy paddle, and I think you'll last,
As your long as lame hot rhymes in an ice rink, you'll sink fast,
Cause your like a missed paper wad, on the brink of trash,
Your lyrics haven't evolved, like the missing links past,
Like a Coco you should probably try to walk upright,
Barely playin the game, but I think your cups too tight,
Or maybe you have a big cup, like a pair of breast,
Girl finally sucks your sick, but she's like "where's the rest",
Because your small shriveled nuts are just hair at best,
By the time I'm through with you, you'll need a skin graph,
Chuckling while doing it, look at my work, and then laugh,
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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Spyder » Dec 24th, '09, 21:35

to be honest bro that was pretty weak
there was alot of random punches in there that could be made to anyone ya know?
like nothing was really directed twords him, it lacked personals
rhyming/vocab was basic. multies were alright
but need to step up for a diss :y:
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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Xray » Dec 26th, '09, 11:47

Weak diss as Spyder said.
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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby J Roc » Dec 27th, '09, 06:56

i'll ghostwrite a reply to me if you want
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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 27th, '09, 09:55

J roc wrote:i'll ghostwrite a reply to me if you want

Lmfao. :shifty:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Spyder » Dec 27th, '09, 17:10

J roc wrote:i'll ghostwrite a reply to me if you want

:o ouch

J you ready for the tourney :angry:
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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 27th, '09, 18:11

I win...if you don't respond...
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Re: J roc diss (title isnt misleading)

Postby Solace » Dec 27th, '09, 18:39

Spyder wrote:to be honest bro that was pretty weak
there was alot of random punches in there that could be made to anyone ya know?
like nothing was really directed twords him, it lacked personals
rhyming/vocab was basic. multies were alright
but need to step up for a diss :y:

Completely agree you've done better Fa-Q
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