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Get it Bitch? Like Jesus

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 29th, '09, 14:05

Thinkin of punches all night, making "u" sweat it out,
Just cause you bleedin from "ur" pussy, makes you the vet now,
I bet now, "ur" worriedt hat you don't get a month to drop,
Cunt stop, your like a morsel of food, a runt to pop,
Yep, your correct, I am jumpin from cloud eight to cloud nine,
And people gave you time, now please am I allowed mine,
Do you need a loud sign, So I wake up, see Roc's weak diss,
when he should come with a meek list,
I'll jog your memory, to make your feet pissed,
Oh wait a minute, you and Nimbus and you won how,
Just cause he doesn't want to respond, makes him done now,
Ok sure, got the Marijuanna leaf, your sigs cool,
But your like a table saw, just a big tool,
I'm not mad, I just want the old Roc, come on "B" your changin,
See I'm Godlike, turn my back, and leave you hangin,
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Re: Get it Bitch? Like Jesus

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 29th, '09, 14:14

Last line is ill :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Get it Bitch? Like Jesus

Postby Solace » Dec 29th, '09, 20:06

You know I'm cool with both of you so don't try and take this as dickriding or anything but that was weak. Last line was the only thing good about it. But keep at it o course :y:
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