Off The Top - Random Keystyle

[Solace]

Iunno I just kept going..

Get up in ya business like a pissed off girlfriend,
Waiting for my reply is like waiting for til the world ends,
Drastic massive strategic actions, got tactics,
Cannot match this caliber of keystyled rappin',
A fascination to get you lacerated at faster paces,
Than masturbation, bullets burst like accusations,
Fuck all the crap you facing, it ain't sad, why act?
'Cause that stress to you ain't a sweat off my back,
Practice, have you tried that? And actually,
Factually my raps you will see are the master of beats,
Off the top of the dome, why you even rapping to me,
I just laugh 'cause it's sad that you'll decease..

[bullet_boy46]

Waiting for my reply is like waiting for til the world ends,
Drastic massive strategic actions, got tactics,
Cannot match this caliber of keystyled rappin',
A fascination to get you lacerated at faster paces,
Than masturbation, bullets burst like accusations

loved those bars... overall it was good a little grammer mistake there

waiting for my reply is like waiting for the world to end


EDIT: or am i confused

[Solace]

Thanks.

I actually don't know why I put "for" there, it could either be what you put but what I meant was:

Waiting for my reply is like waiting til the world ends,

(world ends rhymes better with girlfriend than world to end)

Thanks for the feed.

[Spyder]

nice key solace
really cant critque it more because it was off the dome

[Solace]

Thanks guys

[mcZu]

Next time do that infront of the camera, try freestyling and record it.

[Solace]

But that means...that means ill actually have to...rap

I might sometime soon and post it up