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Remember The Name [Collab verse]

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Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby Xray » Dec 31st, '09, 04:59

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7299920

Sinima left a verse open, and I love that beat so I'm gonna drop this verse on it.

You can hate the clouds, but the region is south
I'm leaped to doubt, the reason perpetratin is sound
Bound to leave you frowned, clowned like circus is down town
I'm reachin your crown, an unbelievable scout, how?
I'm deep in your house now, target's locked on your vowels, pow
Screamin, reachin to bail out, but your lungs seem to air out
A suitable kill, yield, when lucifer's will drilled
On four of your foreheads, holes deep in your fought death
Every line I cross it, rarely blind to for-get
My designs from non-sense, can't define my souls wrench
My flows tense, evidence is negligence, like illegal medicines
cause ever since, I been innocent, they've been thinkin I'm foul at events
No sense till I was raised to be cautious
Now they thinkin I've lost it, yet I've never really had it
till these doors lit! and broke
Now I'm focused, a locust in the forest, a gauntlet!


Feed will be returned, but I'm low on bandwidth atm so probably can't return feed till a few days, when my bandwidth refreshes. :b:
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby Xray » Dec 31st, '09, 09:05

31 views and not one person left feed lol. Sucked that bad? damn.
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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby mcZu » Dec 31st, '09, 17:09

Dope verse, nice rhyme scheme. Flow seems smooth, and lyrically it's good. Can't wait to hear this on wax.
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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby Xray » Dec 31st, '09, 18:18

Finally someone feeds lol thanks bro. :y:
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby classthe_king » Dec 31st, '09, 18:24

The rhyming on this is great :worship: The flow sounded perfect, i agree with zu, make sure you post this up when you finish this.
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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 31st, '09, 20:13

XRay, you gotta write & post more, bro. That was dope. :y: :y:

Definitely looking forward to hear the audio.
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Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby Xray » Jan 1st, '10, 07:31

Glad you two liked it. :b:

I'll post the track once I get the chance to record it no doubt. :y:
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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 1st, '10, 11:35

i liked it man it's fucking dope :y: ,, can't wait to hear ya again ,,,,, bro ,
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Re: Remember The Name [Collab verse]

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 1st, '10, 12:19

dayyymmmmnnnnn

lmao, sinima gonna get murdered hahaha

let me know when u post this on audio stage
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