End The Pain II

[gutawafang]

Stuck in the mind of an eye that's seeing pain
Blurred in the vision, realize he's in pain
He complains as he feigns and maintains in his brain
That his pain is again another bane of his reign
Took his time to regain his balance, he refrains
He's been sane but all they say is he's insane
And all night he tries to gain, took his aim in this game
All the time he's been trying to attain, all this fame
But it's just a dream, it's only partial of his success
So when he screams, it's proving that he's obsessed
He's posessed, but in his heart his desire is just protest
He's being a puppet in this show, but he know best -to show his best
Even being locked in pain, he's got the key to breathe again
Suffocated but ain't dead, he chooses a different lane
He tries to see what's in the pain, it ain't needles, it ain't blades
Blurred and pixelated, it lies in the middle of his wait

It's so dark, it's so silent
I can't be breathe, I need a knife
I wanna die, but not so violent
I wanna die discreetly, end my life

Blood to prove he lives so he cuts and he pretends
That it's the cure to his disease, his knives would just be friends
And his mind still wouldn't see cuz it's foggy and it's rainy
Like rain of tears, he feels dizzy and that's his pain be
He tends to feed himself, a bulimic, but at least he tries
But then again it's more than his suffering in his cries
He tries to scream again but to no avail, nobody came
So he thinks his jobs will always fail, he won't have fame
He won't even have a job, he won't even be looking for it
He won't even be standing up cuz he's shook and he's shit
He thinks he won't make it, so he prepares to die
Took a lighter and some matches, but he asks -where's the fire
That's a senile question, so he thinks again, he's just obsessed
He tries to fix his blurred vision and sees that he's depressed
He tries to see what's in the pain, it ain't needles, it ain't blades
Blurred and pixelated, it lies in the middle of his wait

It's so dark, it's so silent
I can't be breathe, I need a knife
I wanna die, but not so violent
I wanna die discreetly, end my life

[gutawafang]

A nice read. I love the hook and the storyline in general.

Thank you Pinkie.

[Ms. Lunaverse]

Woah first time reading your stuff. It was really good. I see some multis in there Hahaha I love these smiley thing lol. Yeah man really good job. Hook is cool

[gutawafang]

Woah first time reading your stuff. It was really good. I see some multis in there Hahaha I love these smiley thing lol. Yeah man really good job. Hook is cool

Thank you Lunaverse!

[Ms. Lunaverse]

No problem!