Breaking Out in Rhyme - Forums Finest

[Edge]

“Breaking Out in Rhyme” by Forum's Finest

Bullet Boy:
beast from the east, ready to feast on the deceased
you better call a priest, when we grow unleashed
as i abuse hashish, as i speak in the babble language of quiche
no one wanna mess with us, thus, causing fuss upon everyone
your life just begun, and now your done, beginning to end
as i portend to you, and help you comprehend, as we grow higher
rapid fire, ecclesiastical attire, makes us completely un-desired
Were un-noticed, as we walk around, the streets of new york
we twist your brains like a torque, pop it off like a cork
and start eating with a fork, stupid cops, sniffing around
like a hound, driving round and round, around town
as me and my boys smoke pounds, in the garage down town
we hallucinating with purple haze, daze off in a freaking craze
walk around the north shore, you could call me hardcore
let Edge help you to explore...

Edge:
i drink vodka, funnel beer, i chug whiskey, i sip wine
my blunts are filled with quaters, you be smoking on them dimes
u keep fucking with the hoodrats, my girls be oh so fine
i got my shit on lock, but i keep bustsing out in rhymes

Edge:
Straight outta the empire state, pupils dialate
As I wait, for my date, with my final fate
I annihilate, this straight jacket
Crazed tactics from this dazed addict
Tryin to get at it, I wait for the perfect opportunity
U could push and shove, aint no1 is movin me
Im looney, see, I just sit back and wait patiently
And watch as people wonder, what this creation be
But no1 sees what this crazed Caucasian sees
Straight outta Staten, the island of Wu killa bees
Im killin these V’s and murdering songs I appear on
I appear strong, as im gone, from smoking marijuan
From this bong, sit back to Cheech and Chong
I am up in smoke, I stand up and choke
Feelin fucked and broke, wanna cut my throat
But I gotta keep movin, negative feedback keeps bruising
Im loosin but that’s the path that im choosin
back to boozing, and I smoke away the pain
Its sunny out, but all I could see is fucken rain
Take the train to the ferry, ferry to the bus
Pick up an ounce and thats when I feel the rush

Edge:
i drink vodka, funnel beer, i chug whiskey, i sip wine
my blunts are filled with quaters, you be smoking on them dimes
u keep fucking with the hoodrats, my girls be oh so fine
i got my shit on lock, but i keep bustsing out in rhymes

Smithy:
Hittin like a nuclear bomb, talkin on the intercom
not knowing where were from, dropin like a firebomb
just the best unlike some, rookies in my palm
everyone just hum's, as the rhymes are calm
hands up, but not the thumb, hittin lines makin them numb
just there soundin dumb, spectator? but just a bum
you'll just never know, what we'll become, chum
hittin everyone to the bottom, destroying your circum
where your the one who's forgotten, losin your earldom
never backin down, just never "forfeit", wont ever come
just the drop of the speed of the Bullet, with you on the exit

Chet star:
stir up a new stew brew, gotta chew thru like glue
whole crew is sick like flu, kicking rhymes like kung fu
masters of taboo mad dudes, our time is long over due
over ur head like applying shampoo, raw like sand dunes
afternoons spitting tunes, and late nights bending spoons
x-men with this rap art, take apart every body part
rearrange the body chart, then kick start hip hop's heart
saviors with odd behaviors, rainbow flow all different flavors
doing favors like we life savers, give old rappers waivers
don't misconstrue the chorus, don't drink beer or pour it
here since the start like a forest, just call me tyrannosaurus
bless ur eyes on a thesaurus, Starr is next to success
no need to address my finesse, I'm the best part like recess

Edge:
i drink vodka, funnel beer, i chug whiskey, i sip wine
my blunts are filled with quaters, you be smoking on them dimes
u keep fucking with the hoodrats, my girls be oh so fine
i got my shit on lock, but i keep bustsing out in rhymes

Slimsoxshady:
Fires burning inside, flows get your furniture fried
I add what's mine then multiply, better learn to divide
I'll turn it to mine and convert them to blind
Got so much bottled up, it's like I turned into wine
Terrible and unbearable so you better be careful
Care to duel? I'll tear the fool so he won't dare to move
Knock you down like I'm hammering nails
Then box you up like you came in the mail
Hit like Tiger at major and superstars in the majors
Hard by nature, park scars and pardon parts of a ranger
Take apart foes with sharp flows like cuts with a razor
Watching Syfy while I listen to Lupe, start duckin the Lasers
Put a bullet in ya boy, Chet, don't take us to the Edge
Relapse hard and then Refill, so put a sock in it, the end

[Slovinec]

these things are pointless, unless you have the audio.. otherwise this is shitty

[Yah-hah]

Was pretty good. Bullet boys was kinda meh idk
Th Edge is best lyricist on the squad. Good job homie
Smithy idk who you are but hey lol. Verse was ok. somewords were kinda off but vocab was cool.
Chet has a cool flow. I really dug it.
slimsoxshady was ok too. Nothin really jumped out there but it wasnt terrible.
Overall nice flow and all that. yall gonna be nice man once yall get goin. Watch out though. Yall aint the group comin........

[Yah-hah]

So is your group called Forums finest

[Element.]

these things are pointless, unless you have the audio.. otherwise this is shitty

Nah its because u cba to read it.

[Edge]

Was pretty good. Bullet boys was kinda meh idk
Th Edge is best lyricist on the squad. Good job homie
Smithy idk who you are but hey lol. Verse was ok. somewords were kinda off but vocab was cool.
Chet has a cool flow. I really dug it.
slimsoxshady was ok too. Nothin really jumped out there but it wasnt terrible.
Overall nice flow and all that. yall gonna be nice man once yall get goin. Watch out though. Yall aint the group comin........

thanks for the feed man appreciate it

and yea wer forums finest

[Element.]

these things are pointless, unless you have the audio.. otherwise this is shitty

Nah its because u cba to read it.

word

[Element.]

Was pretty good. Bullet boys was kinda meh idk
Th Edge is best lyricist on the squad. Good job homie
Smithy idk who you are but hey lol. Verse was ok. somewords were kinda off but vocab was cool.
Chet has a cool flow. I really dug it.
slimsoxshady was ok too. Nothin really jumped out there but it wasnt terrible.
Overall nice flow and all that. yall gonna be nice man once yall get goin. Watch out though. Yall aint the group comin........

yeah bullet didnt really rhyme much
but thanks for my feed on my verse aswell

[Element.]

Nothing pointless about having fun writing with some friends, & improve a bit along the way.

Thanks for the feed Yah, I'll be sure to return the favor. Me giving feed in this area has been lacking

[slimsoxshady]

i gotta chill with all these battle rap verses...shits getting outta control

[Element.]

i gotta chill with all these battle rap verses...shits getting outta control

What'cha mean?

[classthe_king]

Like Yah said, this was just average.
Bulletboy-You honestly had no memorable lines, i saw the amount of rhymes but you had no multis and that hurts your verse. You need to work on the wordplay alot to.
Edge-Your rhyming was better then bulletboy's but you too didnt have any memorable lines. You also need to work on the wordplay and punches.
Smithy-Another pretty boring verse. Work on the rhyming and wordplay, i sound like a broken record
Chett-I know your verse was just for fun But you had some funny wordplay and this, rhyming was really basic though and held you down
Slimsoxshady-Best verse by far, rhymes were good and wordplay and punches were alright. You still have alot to work on though.

Forums finest lol, can't fuck wit the 5 Star Generals

[Edge]

Like Yah said, this was just average.
Bulletboy-You honestly had no memorable lines, i saw the amount of rhymes but you had no multis and that hurts your verse. You need to work on the wordplay alot to.
Edge-Your rhyming was better then bulletboy's but you too didnt have any memorable lines. You also need to work on the wordplay and punches.
Smithy-Another pretty boring verse. Work on the rhyming and wordplay, i sound like a broken record
Chett-I know your verse was just for fun But you had some funny wordplay and this, rhyming was really basic though and held you down
Slimsoxshady-Best verse by far, rhymes were good and wordplay and punches were alright. You still have alot to work on though.

Forums finest lol, can't fuck wit the 5 Star Generals

thanks for the feed, il work on it

[Element.]

Like Yah said, this was just average.
Bulletboy-You honestly had no memorable lines, i saw the amount of rhymes but you had no multis and that hurts your verse. You need to work on the wordplay alot to.
Edge-Your rhyming was better then bulletboy's but you too didnt have any memorable lines. You also need to work on the wordplay and punches.
Smithy-Another pretty boring verse. Work on the rhyming and wordplay, i sound like a broken record
Chett-I know your verse was just for fun But you had some funny wordplay and this, rhyming was really basic though and held you down
Slimsoxshady-Best verse by far, rhymes were good and wordplay and punches were alright. You still have alot to work on though.

Forums finest lol, can't fuck wit the 5 Star Generals

I will work on my rhymes and wordplay

[Emadyville]

I liked slimsoxshady's the best, chet's was good cause it was entertaining, bullet's didn;t flow very well, and edge yours coulda flowed a little better too. Keep writing guys